I think it's funny how you wrote the lycris to Caramelldansen. I'm from sweden and that's why it sounds so funny beacuse when I read it I was saying it aloud to myself in swedish. By the way it's " Vi undrar är ni redo att vara med. Armarna upp nu ska ni få se. Kom igen. Vem som helst kan vara med. Så rör på era fötter. O-a-a-a. Och vicka era höfter. O-la-la-la. Gör som vi. Till denna melodi. O-ahh-ahh-ahh. Dansa med oss, Klappa era händer. Gör som vi gör ta bara ett steg åt vänster. Lyssna och lär, Missa inte chansen. Nu är vi här med, Caramelldansen." I'm not saying your wrong I just thought I could tell you. I would propably also do that mistake if I were not from sweden. Another thing you could do is to write in the english lycris. Now away from that I love you story it's funny. :) 3

Very very cute! I laughed almost all the way through your chapters and I quickly fell in love with the way you describe them. It is so natural and has a nice flow to it. Very well done.

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AW!

I LUFFZ DIS!

It's so incredibly cute, I really like it - AND NO WAYS! I love Caramelldansen AND I Hate Everything About You; they be some o' my faves!

This is adorable. I have to say, when I imagined Light in that outfit... I about fell outta my chair laughing!

Continue, please!

That was epic. xD

continue :3

More! More!

I love Caramelldansen 33 It's in my iPod. Lol. Honest!

Well, Mello's pants are tight. :

Update soon, I'm looking forward to it! C:

"I want a large double cheese burger meal with a root beer and two fires. Super sized."

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Two FIRES! Jeez Matt, what the hell!

(I know it was probably a typo, but that amused me to no end.)

Lov'n it.

lol, you totally need to write MOAR!

Zomg! I can't wait for the next chapter my sides hurt from laughing so much after reading all the chapters, lol! And I actually split my lip (shows how much I actually smile lol). subscribe! favorite!

~Mitsukai-chan

This was kinda funny. 3 I liked the teeter-totter thing.

Can't wait for the update.

*sings along with Light* L's a panda, cuby cuby cuby... whoohoo!

Oh, everyone hates port-a-potties. They're so gross! *pets Raito* If I were in that situation, though, I'd just hold it. And yeah, I can totally see housewife-Raito screaming and hitting mice with a broom. Just something he would do.

I hope you continue this soon! I love this kind of humour. 3

OMFG, I BURST OUT LAUGHING WHEN YOU WROTE THAT L WAS LAUGHING HYSTERICALLY AT SOMETHING OUTSIDE THE WINDOW WHEN THERE WAS NOTHING THERE! :D Amazing story! Can't wait to click the next chappy!

Hoorah for possesive matt! :3

Kawaii!

Thank you desu for writing this story.

Welldone! x

p.s~ And yeah i know what you mean about detailed writing. I'm like that too. Like, in an exam i'd write about 4 pages and others write around 1 1/2 LMAO.

Welldone again!

No harm in being clever! ;)