Man there is no true ending to this (and you know what i mean when i say that ) she should have gotten told what happen'd to her father.

I all most cried this breaks my heart .

This is the third that I have read from what I can assume is a connected series...Did something happen to you? This still makes me want to cry. Death is never easy, but it's harder with a child. TT_TT

That was so beautiful but very sad [

I love it!

It almost made me cry

great job D

Even the thought of Lee dying makes me want to cry. You're really good with this stuff. Keep writing!

:'( That one brought a tear to my eye and I remember Hugh's funeral also...

I remember that episode! Or, rather, chapter. I'm reading the manga, which is COMPLETELY different from the anime...

Still... I cried when Maes Hughes died!

This was so sad! It was cute how this was narrated in a child's point of view. I really like this. You should make a sequel or another chapter.

~CherryCrystalMint

Wow. I love how you wrote it in the child's point of view. It made it all very real. Good job.