This is really funny, please continue this marvolous story.

~Suzuki~

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lol x.x i didnt notice the new review button. This fic is lollerskates xD. I was like LOL Abercromie model? Well the writing was nice o.o except in the beginning...some mistakes? w/e still pro x.x and the bloopers pwn x.x

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The bloopers are weird but an all together good story.

Great start! I can't wait to see where this is headed!

wow i like ur story its great

Awesome, love it so far! Can't wait to read more. D

Preatty good.

Its awesome!

I love the way that Edward and Bella meet. Its a loot different.

Go you for having an imagination :p

but PLEASE keep going with it (:

I like it a lot!

I love it! Egotistical outsider. That's funny. It's a very good opening chapter.

Haha this is original and I like it!

Brought a smile to my lips as I read it.

Hope you do continue on, it's interesting.

Can't wait til chapter 2 is up.

Oh I likey! Update!

Horses and Twilight; my two favorite things eva!

I show horses, so, :)