| Reviews for Affection |
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Thegreenconsultingdragonlord chapter 1 . 9/13/2013 This is REALLY cute :) |
metrokarateacademyrocks chapter 1 . 5/23/2010 i love it, i was also listenning to popular. awkard...right? |
jenfalovesjaffas chapter 1 . 10/2/2009 How incredibly amusing, and Fiyero . |
TheSquintiestSquint chapter 1 . 4/27/2009 Very cute and very funny. It seems like exactly the type of misguided thing Galinda would do-with the best of intentions of course. Even worse because her meddling ruined any chance of Elphaba listening to Fiyero when he finally got a chance to approach her. Oh well, all's well that ends well and everything turns out all right in the end for Fiyero and Elphaba...except the whole Fiyero being stuck as a scarecrow thing. *shrugs* I guess you can't ask for perfection. Anyway, back on topic, I liked this story. Good job. |
TerribleWaitress chapter 1 . 9/21/2008 Ah, loved it. Really amusing too! x |
The Phantom's Muse chapter 1 . 9/12/2008 I absolutely loved this one! It was cute, and funny, and surprising…all of the good stuff rolled into one fic. I’m just glad that I read this before going to “work”. Now I’ll be thinking about it all day and giggling, thus earning both perplexed and amused looks from people. Good times ahead. ‘So it wasn’t that she thought it was impossible. But when Avaric approached her after class and shrewdly traced the line of her arm, purringly inquiring about her plans for after class, Elphaba had to admit she was shocked.’ -I loved how the very first guy who approaches her is Avaric. I could just see Elphaba’s face. I think that it also set the mood for utter hilarity. “Oh, Boq,” she sighed, relieved to see someone whom she knew couldn’t pretend to care for her, as his limitless love for her room mate was bound to get in the way. “It’s so good to see you, everyone -” “Really?” Boq looked far too excited for Elphaba’s liking. “It’s g-good to see you, too, Miss Elphaba. I was just th-thinking about you.” Why was he blushing? “Why are you blushing?” His blush increased. “I’m not.” -This was one of my favorite interactions in the story. I don’t read/see a lot of stories that involve Boq liking Elphaba, but this was hilariously cute. And my favorite line in the story?: Why was he blushing? “Why are you blushing?” I can’t explain why I love it. I just do. “The men - The men are after me!” -Another favorite line. This quote should be in a Quote Museum, or something. Because honestly, how many times do you get to hear Elphaba say THAT? “You put a love spell on the entire campus?” “Well, not the entire campus, clearly! I couldn’t find everyone, and, of course, I didn’t say Fiyero’s name...” -*GASP!* Oh. My. Oz! This fic made me happy, but now I’m just plain giddy! You never fail to surprise me. I really hope that you’ll be inspired and write another fantastic fic soon! |
jennifer chapter 1 . 8/25/2008 o keep going please. |
BlissfullySortOfAnonymous chapter 1 . 8/25/2008 "the men-the men are after me!" lol, this is hilarious! this would make a great story, please continue? |
She Who Shall Go Nameless chapter 1 . 8/24/2008 That was awesome! I love it. |
EnneWicked chapter 1 . 8/24/2008 I loved this! Fiyero is just a fox. ugh I need a Fiyero in my life. Buy me one? Love this another great fic from danders. x |
fermataoso chapter 1 . 8/24/2008 Yay! A oneshot! I love all the men vying for Elphaba's attention, and her extreme discomfort with it. Boq's stuttering was adorable. “Elphie, I was just looking for you!” “I’m sure you were,” she sighed. HA! You know you love it Elphie. Just admit it, kiss and make up, and have his babies. :-D “No, Fiyero! Not you! Please, I - I have to go.” Aw, I love how she is just annoyed with everyone else, but it's like he went too far because she really does want him to chase her and declare his undying love for her. Or is that just me? “Well, firstly, a spell. That I did! I did a spell that worked!” “You did a spell? Without my supervision?” She's so adorable and proud. Yeah, it was a bad idea, but it was pretty darn cute. “Of course not, Elphie! Why would I put a love spell for you on my boyfriend!” True. Of course she didn't put a love spell on him, because it would be so utterly unnecessary. Love it. This was a great oneshot to cheer up my gloomy, stormy Sunday. Thanks! |
LostOzian chapter 1 . 8/24/2008 Dand... Dand, Dand, Dand, dearest Danderson... d!/-v*SQUEE*v-\!b Squee to the moon and back! That was so adorably sweet! True beauty speaking, Elphaba is like a model. Better than a model. Goddess. Better than goddess! And all the guys you named (aka, the ones we care about) were so in character. I loved Boq. He's just so damn *smitten* around beautiful girls! Will the guys remember this? :P That'd be funny. But more trouble than its worth. You ended on a sweet note. Fave-e-e-e. And I need a oneshot. :) -LostOzian |
figure in a landscape chapter 1 . 8/24/2008 Is this going to be a one-shot. I can almost imagine Elphaba's shock at all the men being attracted to her. Fiyero wasn't under the spell. I really want to know what he was going to say. |
legogirleight chapter 1 . 8/24/2008 Ahahhaha, Glinda putting a love spell on a lot of the campus. Haha. God. |
Jaxalie chapter 1 . 8/24/2008 that was well good. kind cute to think that Yero wasnt under the spell :p lol ] |