I still really love this, it sounds so helpess and it breaks my heart dude, so obviously its really good lol

Also i know it wasn’t exactly written for it, but it does kinda make me think, what if this was metal sonic’s thoughts as he ran away from what just happened, since he and sonic are kinda linked like that

Anyway, this is still really good~

for the first poem i have read by you i must say i was impressed. despite the fact that there was little detail and explanation as to how the situation had come about it mattered not. you have left it up to us the readers to make of it what we will and to let our own emtions fly, thats truly a sign of a great writer.

Oh gosh, this is really powerful, because of the way you make use of spaces and words. It's almost like a poem in that respect, but it's even ebtter because there is no confusion, what's on the page is exaclty what's happening. It's a really nice piece, good work.

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D8 aw Tails...

great poem thing