I really enjoyed the story. I like the way you ended it with a kind of happy ending. The fight sequences were great and the romantic areas were tastefully written. I am glad the rape sections were not written in great detail as they have bad effects on myself. You did great work writing an enjoyable story.
Thank you,
Arc-Welder
Victor

That was so awesome!

A BABY?!

aww the ending is ad for those of the parents, and families who didn't get there child back. but at least itex's money is paying for what they caused!

so to be clear max is having twins, and jeb is evil again and somehow god ahold of max? O.o

did fang advance his powers or something, and make them all go invisible?

i like the cullens thoughts on the flock. and you did a very good job when you wrote out what they saw in the flocks minds while they were singing, i was mentally picking out the scenes! :)

Goldenrose37, I have just started reading Maximum Ride and Twilight crossovers last night, so I don't have much experience reading these kinds of stories. What I can tell you, though, is that this is, by far, the best one I've ever read! I'm glad the flock has found a family, and I'm glad all of the children have found their families. This is an awesome story, Goldenrose37!

way to go :D

Love it, you should do a sequel!

ah

im scarred for life.

i just died alittle on the inside.

*adds story to favorites*

D

make a segual please!

Its Roselie's and Jacob's.

Really good story! I liked the ending, where Itex was brought down.

Okay, I love it, but the one thing I did notice is with all your stories, you just write where.

Where - as in, "Where are you?"

Were - as in, "Were you at school today?"

we're - as in, "We're in the gifted classes."

There you go.