Warren deserves better. there moments were I really liked deja, but mostly she annoyed me. I felt for her pain, but that cound't balance out her judgmental, self centered acts.

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i just love how you pop Spanish words and expressions randomly. Anyway, gotta keep reading your fic...

it makes me feel very stupid to admit that until this chapter I did not know how to pronounce Deja's name..._' oh how the mighty have fallen. Great fic btw very cute so far keep up the good work! :D

this is funny becaause my name is deja! lol

good story too

loved the story it was good. The endding was good too you didn't need any more, but if u wanted to you could have gone manly different ways with it, but i like the one you picked its realy good story keep wrighting :):)

Aaaaaaawe! :) :(

I really wanted to see something more happen. Very open-ended, leave-it-up-to-the-reader ending. Sigh. I still loved it though! :D It's as you said, an appropriate ending to their already tumultuous relationship.

Of course a one-shot would be greatly appreciated. ;) Haha. I enjoyed this story immensely!

NO Its over you should do a sequel i love the story

Hey FabulousLasVegas,

I like your story very much (because I like the characters - Warren is amazing), there is just one little thing to mention:

In Spanish, "donde" used as a question word is written with an accent: ?dónde? (sry, my PC doesn't do that other question mark). So are all the others , e.g. qué, cuál (you did this one right, didn't you?), cómo, quién...

So... please don't call me a know-it-all, but that's how I am... I DO like your story, even though Deja is very emo sometimes. And I like the power you gave Michael. Just continue writing, you're doing great!

Lemon

you had me scared for a chapter there that you would pair Warren with some idiot simpering teacher. I love this story I hope there is a sequel.

Lisa

aw I love them! :D

this is really good...I have a question though...Are you fluent in Spanish? I'm just wondering cuz most of the sentences in Spanish were correctly translated...sorry my friend is from san salvador...I think...Something witha salvador...So I was just curious

ah... more nail biting-ness! they need to make up for real! lex is adorable!

dude that sucks so hard why does everything have to be so hard for them? why? awesome nail bitter tho!

Well hi its me TMBM and Cooky, of course. I loved the message you send me. *.* You made me feel loved. La-La-La-La-La-La

Cooky: Oh great she's La-La-ing again. I got give you props you may be the first person that uses latino heritage in a story that I have read. Anyways the power of Deja is cool but also I feel bad for the girl. She has to tell herself that what had happened yesterday was real.

TMBM: :(

Cooky: What are you sad about now?

TMBM: *looks away from Cooky*

Cooky: o.O *sigh* What I do this time?

TMBM: not talking to you

Cooky: whatever loca chica. See you next chapter/review. And figure out what's wrong with the chica loca. See ya later.