Mmh, as much as I love this story, I don't understand why you chose to change Rin's death? It seems pretty unnecessary, and it also teached Kakashi a few things, that made him the way he is now.
The rest is fantastic, as always. I haven't checked if it's finished, but I hope you don't abandon this story.

quick tip: It's spelled 'sensei' not 'sensai' please change it when you have timeIt is something that really bugs me while reading. sorry.

Great story, and I plan on giving a review once I'm finished but I'm confused by this chapter. Kakashi spoke with Rin but she's supposed to be dead, is that a mistake or something? Anyway, great job as always and I can't wait to read more. Your writing is amazing.

very well explained! loved that you kept that consistent. most other writers would never had addressed the fact that he has his chakra points blocked and that it would have a negative effect later on. Awesome that you adressed that so well. Great story so far, really enjoying it! It's been downloaded for a while and I finally got around to reading it. I'm mad that I didn't give it a look sooner. Great story!

So I just printed out the last two chapters today and I read my old reviews while I was at it... I had no idea how annoying I sounded... Sorry about that... XD

God, I have missed this! I think this is what, my seventh, eighth time here?

I haven't been reading much fanfiction because the tablet I normally use is down right now and it just didn't feel the same without it! I hope this doesn't offend you, but I'm going to try to print out the whole story so I can read it again! If only fanfiction could count as a novel! I love love LOVE your stories!

One more thing, I'm a little obsessed with Kakashi too so don't mistake my words for scorn. It's cute how obsessed you are over him and you could not see anyone else doing anything but loving dat kakashi ass.

I've got to say, it's pretty impressive how one minded you are on Kakashi. Reading this felt like I was reading a strange collection of all of your Kakashi fetishes. I have no doubt, that if you kept this story in first person that most of the events in this plot wouldn't have happened. Your flow was good and your descriptions were steady. The only issue is that it seems everyone's out for dat Kakashi ass. This story lacks the suspense and drama brought by the unknown. Such unknown is only brought by your devotion to first person. A good example is a serial killer and victim situation. The victim does not know or can predict events happening in the other room, it leaves events available to the readers imagination. The killer knows what he's going to do to the victim, hence bringing suspense, BUT he does not know what the victim will do, and he faces problems that will try to prevent his kill. This writing strategy creates suspense since it makes the conclusion uncertain. What YOU did was lay out EVERYTHING and ogle over kakashi and his cool dodging. He also cried a lot, and did some pretty bad tactics. I did enjoy reading this and Jiraiya's actions were spot on. At one point Jiraiya noticed that danger was following Kakashi and for a second I thought he broke the fourth wall but then it turned into a pity fest. I look forward to reading "The Will of Fire". Ciao!

It was great!

You've killed Ibiki? I can't belive it... I'm crying TT

Okay, I have to say this now... Kakashi is the Hokage, and this is the second time he has been kidnapped from within his village, and the *third* time within the story. Once, I can understand, twice, okay, so they had to deal with three S-Ranked. By now, I no longer have faith in Village security and personnel screening.

AWESOMEEEEEE! Needs more reviews!

NOOOOOO! _ _ _ KAKASHIIIIIIIIIII!

P.s, I know what happens. Remember, I read this story 3 times-(maybe more)-already. Good job on the story!

P.p.s, It's kunAri, not kuneri, and the female's name is spelled Kunarei. Don't be salty, I spellcheck everyone, especailly me!

Me again! I LOVE this story! I wish it could be a set of Naruto Shippuden episodes, or a Naruto movie.. I would watch over and over again!

Love your story, but it should be sensei, not sensai for future refrence. Good job, now, HURRY UP AND WRITE! PLZPLZPLZPLZPLZPLZ DO A STORY WHERE KAKASHI IS SICK! _