"I think we could have been great friends.,"
is a sad thing to say or never say.

Poor Wolf, a tragic life from start to death.

Wow, you did a very good job. That final sentence, that spoke louder than everything, I'd say. Most of the things Wolf knew about Fox were things he didn't like. The chance of there being a good friendship between them was destroyed by Wolf not being able to accept that Fox was simply a better pilot than he was, and he spent his whole life trying to disprove that, which as we see, wasn't a desirable ending. I think there's a very clear moral here, and I commend you for writing this. Good luck in your future writings, and I tip my non-existent hat at you for being such a swell poet. XD

Awesome and deep. Good job and keep it up

So I've been reading a few of your stories, and I have to say I'm quite impressed. It's very evident that you are a poet at heart, and these short little one-shots really work for you. It's like you can tell a full length tale in just a few paragraphs. It's really amazing.

I also have to say that these little shorts really get me thinking. This is a very new aspect to Wolf's character and an interesting one at that. I always say the mark of a good story is when the reader is left thinking further into what he just read. Your work certainly accomplishes this.

I think writing poetry is several degrees difficult than writing short stories. The fact that you can do it this well, certainly earns my respect.

~CL

wow in this you really brought out something I never ever would have thought of... that was a great story!

Deep... Dark... Sad... This was a really good fanfic!

Nicely done. It made me think. I actually enjoy that in a story, because that means its pretty damn good. Some of the parts were awkwardly written or stated strangely, but otherwise it was nice. The staining ink seemed really strangely written, not sure if you meant it to be that way but oh well. Commenting on the story itself, It was short, but really powerful. the phrasing of scenes gave a really clear message of what you wanted to say, and every line seemed to be its own story. i hope to see more of your writing if possible.

-"Life is just a fallacy of death." Fatal Spark

Very sad, but very truthful. Each little detail can poke and prod the mind to feel as though they are right there, having the storyteller simply whisper it in their ear and having the feeling come in contact with their soul. My words can not even begin to scratch the surface, as it were, of the moral of this. Very, very nicely done. I congratulate you on having enthralled me. :D

This is a very touching short story. I feel like it captures the intensity between them as well as the possible "what ifs" scenarios.

The last sentence displays such beautiful agony as you can just imagine his dying appearance, wishes, and regrets.

Short, but very, very, powerful. Definitely worth a favourite.

beautiful...

the language seems a little too fancy for Wolf, but...

definitely something magnificent here.

...I was totally going to make a oneshot that would end up something like this. Well, not really the same thoughts, but the same situation. Hrm...

Anyway, on to the story!

This is a very well-done fic. Maybe a bit too metaphorical, but I'm bad at judging figurative things like that. The part about this that is the most disturbing, the most attention-grabbing, is that it's true. Once two people (for whatever reason) become mortal enemies, there's not really any way to change that, no matter how much they want to. Even if they could somehow break the conflict between them, it'd still be too awkward to become good friends.

...Hrm. This certainly made me think a bit. Grats for that.

WOW This was a great fic.

I love how you wrote this.

Keep up your good work. w