I loved it.

Sweet, passionate lovemaking. My favorite. :)
Please keep it up.
Greets from Germany. :)

I liked that!

Daw, cute smut is my favorite. I adore this!

An all good Gelphie ending [:

Great job love the smut and i liked how you put a leason at the end

More storys Pleaseee [:

Bye for now [:

cute, so cute.

That btw is Erotic NOT Smut!

Good work!

-Gareth

Wonderful, my friend, very wonderful. It was really nice and sweet. Very lovable. Great job.

That summed up all that Gelphie is, cute, sexy and loveable, all in one chapter, nicely done, you should try and finish your other ones if they're anywhere near as good as this I'm sure we'll all love them.

Very, very nice. I like your characterization of Elphaba, as well as Glinda.

Wow. You reached a whole new level of awesomeness. That was... holy crap! Friggin sweet!

that was awsome lolthey are very confy in each others arms and body. you do a great job

Awh:)

Cute and smuttish ahah, I love it.

Very much enjoyed.

Awesome story! Nothing beats Gelphie love.

You did a beautiful job writing this.

I thought the carpet joke was really funny.

Well done.

Oo, nice! Very sweet. Beautiful. GREAT job! !

that was hot, n cute at the same time, who new it was possible. i love how inocent glinda can be even durrin sex, and i love how understandin elphie is. asome job