Beautifully written! This was so unique because I don’t recall anyone else in the GW fandom attempting to write a tale that could be a backstory for Chang Wufei, his ancestry and cultural values.

I love how his Gundam brothers formed the perfect Gestahlten circle ️ to protect their own. Hopefully with time Wufei’s warrior spirit will bounce back and he will recover.

Wish there was more to this story. Seems like it ‘needs’ at least one more chapter to pull it all together. Or is that the nature of one shots/ short stories to leave the reader ‘wanting’ more?!

while the previous chapter had captured the more ruthless nature of the Gundam pilots, thi is a heartwrenching narration of Wufei's injuries, mental and physical. A proud dragon with a will of steel now nearly broken, but not quite; and his four brothers who'd stood and supported him during his darkest time.

Dark, with hints of gruesome, gory parts; the vivid description of each one's feelings, especially their shared quality of not forgiving easily; the detailed narration of the execution of their dish of revenge; and their tender care for an injured family member. A gestalt, in some ways.

Beautiful dark but beautiful

Wow. Very angsty and well written. I particularly liked the first chapter and the way you showed the cool determination of the other pilots to strike back for someone hurting their family.

Will there be more?

loved it.

I don't know what to say. I like it, and it's sad-that about sums it up for my thoughts.

loved it!

"E nomine padre,"

What language is that? (Or if you want to make it easy for me, what's it mean?)

I love your stories, I re-read them all the time~

Wow, this story is brilliant. I was hooked the entire time, and I hope this isn't the end. You wrote Wufei brilliant, and I loved the interaction between the pilots. Great job!

Awesome.

Oh man. I was hoping Wufei wouldn't be taking that path. I was hoping too much. My hope was foolish. But still I hope. Now I hope for his future. I hope they can do enough. Now I am being foolish. Of course they can. I just hope, he will stand where he was falling.

I thought that this was a oneshot, I'm glad it's not. I really enjoy your story. I can't wait until the next chapter.

Kyaa ... you made it more depressing. ;_; Still damn good, though. I swear, this story has gotten me into GW fanfiction, just a little. I see the appeal now! _;