You forgot to do meg and herc

Love the story but Belle's prince's name is Adam, Snow White's prince is Fredrick, and Cinderella's prince is Alphonze

I love the inclusion of Kim Possible.

These are great stories, do we really have to wait a whole year for the next one? You could write into the future.

I love this story! I can't wait for next year's story! Thank you so much for writing this amazing story. Please PM me next year when you begin the next story!

~Breze

Dear kim’s 1 fan

Nice little wrap up chapter.

The good byes and interactions were touching and pretty much in character. I really like the friendship between Stitch, Mushu, Sebastian and Rufus. You gave them some good depth and emotion.

I like many of the interactions among the princesses and junior princesses.

Nice little ending: the Disney female villains arrive too late. But that’s OK. They’ll wait till next year (and the apple gag was good).

The wholesome standards are high. Nothing is offensive.

I hope this review brightens your day. And remember, keep practicing and don’t rush it. Take your time. God bless.

Data Seeker

What a good chapter! and Hannah did perform too! that was nice, but wonder if Maddie saw Zack revert back to his true age...

and now, I'm waiting for the ending.

Dear kim’s 1 fan

Nice little update. The quality is a little better then in the last chapter. Keep practicing and remember, take your time and work on the quality of your chapters.

The beginning with Stitch, Mushu, Sebastian and Rufus was amusing and handled their characters and interactions well.

The scene with the Blue Fairy was well down. I think Mosby being her dancing partner is weird, but I won’t make a big deal about it. The next scene with the Blue Fairy and her employee Jimmy Cricket was great.

The following scenes with the princes, partners, boyfriends getting alerted to the dance was great, and that was interesting that the Blue Fairy makes Zack Maddie’s age so he can dance with her.

The scene with the Princesses and their activities was amusing and well written. I’m not a fan of Hanna Montana, but it was creatively handled well.

The scene with the four Princess friends/helpers; Mushu, Rufus, Sebastian and Stitch was entertaining. You gave them depth.

The scene with the princesses dancing with their loved ones was entertaining and romantic. You worked on certain details very well. CONGRATULATIONS.

The wholesome standards are high. Nohting is offensive.

I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless.

Data Seeker

That chapter was amazing! I loved it! I can't wait for next week!

~Breze

Dear kim’s 1 fan

This is another good chapter. The quality is good; but you need to work on certain details.

One, I know that the Disney Princesses are human, but how does it affect non-human characters: Maid Marian, Gadget. Were they not cartoons anymore, humans too, or what?

Also, you should work on giving minor characters a little more depth. Meeko and Abu can’t speak, but there are ways to describe their thoughts and emotions. Here are tips: describe facial expressions, their gestures and animal sounds they make.

Anyway, enough with the criticism and offering suggestions; here are compliments.

The beginning was good; there are some robberies (curtsey of Meeko and Abu) and they are dealt with by Zak and Cody.

The following scenes involving the Disney Princesses and the Disney Junior Princesses are well written. Many of them are very in character, and their interactions are amusing with a touch of emotion, and their friendly disagreements are pretty well written.

And nice surprise. So that’s why the Princesses became human, about a Hanna Montana contract about not being animated. I thought something sinister was at work.

The wholesome standards are high. There is nothing offensive.

I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless.

Data Seeker

I l-o-v-e-d that chapter! It was great! I can't wait for the next one! Update soon!

Woah! That's weird! I wonder what happens next! Also, maybe one of the bad fairies can come to the Tipton, like the one that made Sleeping eauty sleep for a hundred years? Jus a suggestion if you run out of ideas. I really like it so far! It's the perfect mix of funny and serious and it kept me on the edge of my seat. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

this story is funny and very detailed, but the chapters are too long

Dear kim’s 1 fan

Nice little chapter.

The quality is pretty good, and you did it without a helper. Congratulations. Your skills have improved. Keep practicing. Now don’t take that last line personally. I’m still practicing too.

The characters are done pretty well, and the loopy cartoon stuff is silly, but good.

The arrival and interactions of the princesses were amusing; the most well crafted. These are the most amusing scenes. The scene with the Blue Fairy. The scene with Lilo and her family. The scene with Princess Kidakagash. The scene with Tinker Bell. And the scene with Wendy, her daughter, Jane, and Alice.

The ending of this chapter had an interesting twist. I wonder what’s going on. Don’t tell me.

The wholesome standards are high, and I liked that the girls didn’t wear revealing swimsuits. Thank you.

I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless.

Data Seeker

Dear kim’s 1 fan

Nice little beginning. The narration, emotion, humor and dialog are amusing. Your skills have somewhat improved. Keep practicing on the quality.

The characters interactions and reactions are good.

I liked that you gave minor characters (Mushu, Rufus, Sebastian, and others) a slightly big role, rather then have them in the back ground. And the Disney Princesses: Jasmine, Belle, Snow White, Kim Possible, Gadget, Ariel and others are done well. It was interesting seeing Melody present with Ariel. Also that they are wearing clothes that modern American Teens wear (and that they are not immodest)

And I think the blond woman is the Blue fairly, unless I’m mistaken.

The characters at the Suite are done well, and bring Hanna Montana was an interesting plot twist (even though Hanna Montana isn’t my favorite show).

The wholesome standards are high.

Clean language.

There is nothing suggestively offensive.

No extreme violence or any other vile content.

I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless.

Data Seeker