Loved it, very well written

How beautifully you write... Thank you so much for these honeymoon stories - they are magical.
Stunning :)

i need the part where bella as a vampire has s** with edward but it will need to be more intense than this :D made my day
(i think)

So beautiful,so .Thank you,thank you,thank you!

that was wow. considered doing the cottage scene? it would be lovely to see it played out with out any more boundaries

absolutley amazing. u definatley capitured bella and edward without a doubt, their love isnt vulgar and gross, it is simply breath taking and beautiful, and u definitley portrayed it. being able to maintain the beauty and keep the readers senses in overdrive! i mean its just simply a pure talent, thank you for sharing and PLEASE continue sharing! i would love to read more about bella and edward!

one word-perfect

Wonderful job as always!

simply perfect!1

i love it

it was well-written

Sexy and romantic

WOW. This was absolutely beautiful. That's the only word at this point!

beautifuly written, i priase you and all your work because it just fits so well with breaking dawn. like corresponding peices to a puzzle (anyone catch the twilight reference) haha anyway... you are an excellent writter... please i beg of you... keep it up!

You're an unbelievable writer! All of your chapters are written prestinely. WOW. AND YOU'RE 17? You must write and practice a lot. And I find it fantastic that you're not insulting this act between them ya know. Some fanfics just get... Vulgar about it and it's wrong. Wow... You're quite a writer. I mean, just the way you use your words and how you get inside their heads...you must really respect them. Man, we would definitely get along!

Another good description. How do you write these so vividly? Long live Twilight!