Hmm, interesting. Although Im almost sure that Danny's first paper was cuter. Looking forward to more!

I think he should of used the first one

Do you play golden sun dark dawn by any chance?

Sorry, its just your name. The story is brill. Thanks for writing it!

-Dusk

Cool ! X3

that was relly good i liked Danny's first paper better it was really deep both ofthem were

Very nice! I

Amazing story. I prefer stoies that have Lancer finding out Danny's secret.

Good story, like how Lancer finally let him off the hook. I'm also looking forward to Superman's Dead. It sounds really good.

...and to my archenemy Daniel.

lol

great story, can't wait to see what lancer thinks

Wow, Danny is a fantastic writer :) you really capture his struggle with how to put to words exactly what he wants! Well done!

This is a very interesting take on the whole "outing" idea, instead of setting up video cameras he writes an essay. original, well-written, I Love It. keep it up, my friend.