Reviews for A Different Beginning
CobraCommand27 chapter 45 . 7/7
man this last bit killed me. I was so hoping you didnt kill him. and lexi too noooooooo
rmw5763 chapter 7 . 6/30
Really, James sounds like an Irresponsible Father. I'm a Father, I know.
Jikol chapter 13 . 6/20
I still can’t get over the fact that James never believed in Sirius never at least met him to check the facts, and having no trial made it worse. Absolutely crazy how they just act like none of that happened
CarpenL chapter 6 . 6/9
im going to read this and try to leave a review on every chapter.
CarpenL chapter 5 . 6/9
im going to read this and try to leave a review on every chapter
CarpenL chapter 4 . 6/8
im going to read this and try to leave a review on every chapter
CarpenL chapter 3 . 6/6
im going to read this and try to leave a review on every chapter
CarpenL chapter 2 . 6/4
im going to read this and try to leave a review on every chapter
Popperfis chapter 72 . 5/29
Harry's grandparents died of drgonpox I think
CarpenL chapter 84 . 4/26
I can just imagine mini Sirius tied to a chair just continually asking random questions
A frustrated fan chapter 27 . 4/24
No offence, but Harry in this is a bit Mary Sue-ish. He has 4 anamigi, is descended 2 of the founders and the gods AND Merlin. And he controls the elements. I can accept the founders thing, it makes sense. I guess he has 4 anamigi, one magical and one more than DUMBLEDORE. But Gods and merlin?! That's too much.
CarpenL chapter 1 . 4/15
I’m beginning to read this for the seventh time
abhinavvemuri123 chapter 9 . 4/5
why are gilderoy lockharts books needed in 3rd year it was copy pasted
abhinavvemuri123 chapter 9 . 4/5
I don't understand basically nothing changed from the actual story till now
Silverwingzz chapter 2 . 4/2
Your story makes no sense in terms of injuries and how James reacted. The Fidelius charm can’t be taken from the original person and can only be given willingly. So i wonder why James did not even question that fact at all. Dude just took what Dumbledore said and forget that Sirius was your best friend. Another thing was with Lily’s injuries, she got paralyzed and now has amnesia yet James simply got back up like nothing even happened. I would’ve read this more if it was more realistic in terms of the Harry Potter world but it was horribly done.
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