| Reviews for Loyalties |
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  Riley chapter 2 . 2/6/2012 Hmm, interesting. I enjoyed this story, it was well written and had a decent plot so kudos on that. However, I saw a mistake at the very beginning and it's bugging me so bad I have to correct it. Starscream is THE fastest flier around, not even Megatron can compete with that. I'm sorry if that was callous but it had to be said. Other than that it was a good story, I definitely enjoyed how dominant Megatron is. But in the second chapter you never said where they were so I had to kind of just guess and supply myself with an image of the Nemesis. Well done. |
 sant04 chapter 2 . 9/10/2011 Poor Starscream, he can't even defend himself against being molested by Megatron. |
| Unesheet chapter 2 . 7/19/2011 Amazing! |
| Unesheet chapter 1 . 7/19/2011 Very nice for someone who doesn't know the fandom very well! It was very believable, and if people have a problem with the AU, then they can just pretend it's G1, and substitute the word "AllSpark" for "Matrix" or something similar. Again, good job! |
| 0ptimuspenguin chapter 2 . 7/8/2010 Loved it . |
| br0flove chapter 2 . 12/13/2009 Hahaaha! Poor Seeker is a pet 3: Baw~ |
| br0flove chapter 1 . 12/13/2009 Oh my. I do love a submissive Megs. |
| Yukiko-Angel chapter 2 . 10/3/2009 FREAKING HOT :D |
| Birdgirl204 chapter 2 . 8/21/2009 Poor, poor poor Starscream. Things like this happening off-screen are obvious even in G1. I feel so bad for him. |
| Kibble Beast chapter 1 . 8/15/2009 O.O no way is this your first forage into tf fanfiction! this is better than a lot of stuff out there... xD okay, maybe i am biased. i like megascream. WHO DOESN'T? anyway, they were brilliant, IC, and all of that wonderful stuff. and it was believable, too... not just a random romping smut fest. heehee. :) naughty megs... WOO! i just HAVE to add this to my favourites, AND to story alerts, just in case you ever get the urge to continue...(hint, hint) :D anyway, love love LOVE IT. i'm going to read your other tf fics now. mwahah. |
| ReadR chapter 1 . 7/13/2009 It's so hot! (fangirle squeal) |
| emptyville chapter 2 . 7/8/2009 very nice XD me loves it so much! |
| mamorel chapter 2 . 7/7/2009 no no. don't shut up! this is good. keep going. i want to read more! |
| Black Ankle chapter 2 . 6/28/2009 This is excellent for being so new to the fandom. I'm glad somebody gets the Megatron/Starscream dynamic. 8D ...more please. |
| Oxigide chapter 2 . 6/26/2009 Gah~ *nosebleed* This is amazing. Cant wait for another update on this, if there is one! Good luck on all your works 3 |
