I got scared for a moment there .I really thought that he did not make it . But it ends well and I'm glad .Thank you.

Yeah ,that 's true . Really angsty but interesting .Now let 's see how it ends .

It's hard but don't give up already Lenalee .

I-Love-it ! Some says we all have two faces. And that only make them more complex .

I have a little complain the chapters are too short.

You're doing good ,so far .

Wow ,seems he is really depressed.

If that's not angsty ,I don 't know what it is.

That 's a good way to start .Let 's see what happen next.

This was one of the best LaviLena stories I read. Great job! Please write more.
I am so happy with the way you ended it. It is good that Lavi fought for himself.

Awww the ending was sweet. I thought Lavi died for sure but that was a twist for sure :D

I just need a moment to pull myself together...

*takes a deep breath*

This story was really touching. I could practically feel how Lavi and Lenalee felt. I very much enjoyed reading this. Your choice of words was amazing and very suitable. You took your leisure time in showing us that Lavi gave up and only wanted to die and emphasized on that on more than one occasion. I truly believed that he was going to die and prepared myself mentally for that.

And the beginning of the last chapter only added to my certainty of his death. But when I read that he was still alive, I was so overwhelmed with emotions that I started crying. Good thing that I have a box of tissues next to me.

I admire those who are able to transmit feelings through words and definitely love their stories.

Kudos for you, you definitely deserve this review.

~KWF~

Yes! He didn't die! :D

Wow!

That story is just so wonderful

I had to cry in the last chapter -

Really great!

happy ending...kya...