Write a second chapter to this. I love it.

My congratulations! Great story!

KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~

This was good and cute but isn't Naruto only 13?

It was good until the end... I don't think I could even think about envisioning Tayuya skipping or saying something like narutos "silly" probably fucking dumbass... Oh I get it you put us in tsukuyomi during the end that's why she acted weird Ohhhhhhh

Aw, such a cute story, heartwarming too! I really enjoy your writing!

That was a nice story. You're a good author.

_ Favorite pairing.

It was nice and fast paste. I ways thought her sharp fruitful language was a defense. Being a only girl in team. Weakness was not an option. Overall it was uber fluffy expeshualy the couch scene *thumbs ups*

I actually cried. Nice work. Love it!

iv read this story so man times and your AN note at the end "I couldn't really come up with a great ending, but I tried. Let me know what you think" its a great ending

A nice short fic. I like this pairing, so I'm biased.

Tayuya should curse more. other than that I liked it.

So what attracted you to the character of Tayuya?

I had to look her up just to remember who she was.

You seem to have a great grasp on the Naruto/Tayuya pairing, i like this one, when she slowly changes her attitude.

The way you have done this is fantastic.