what?! i'm utterly confused!
the story was so great all along and what is this ending?!
was this suppose to be "living happily ever after?" if it was it's just too abrupt
and the last two lines are totally creepy...why would hakkai invite Jien (only?!) to live with them...
ohh...the whole story was so exciting until the ending...*sad face*
any how, good job on the story :)

that . . .was awesome! and incredably fun! my only complaint was that it ended rather abruptly . . . . but it was still SO good!

(Drools) That was awesome! Gojyo on bottom! Gojyo in a dress! LOL. Was this it? Or are you continuing? Goku and Sanzo had really small parts though...but yay for Hakuryu and Jien! This was a great spin on a classic tale.

I think you rushed the end but it was very good.

Oh I love this story! Very interesting idea and I just loved reading it. It was so fun to read too, and thinking about Gojyo wearing a dress is just too awesome to think about!

An interesting and fun re-telling of Beauty and the Beast. My only complaint, and it is a small one, is that Lord Cho and Lord Gojyo's relationship seemed a bit rushed. I would have liked a bit more exploration of them getting to know each other before they really got to know each other. ;-)

I've got to say...this is a very unique concept with the Saiyuki boys. And just having a mental image of Gojyo in a dress was worth it. :D I'm very interested to see where this is going, because alas, I've never actually watched Beauty and the Beast. lol