Oh, this is actually quiet a sad story, but i really liled The way you’d written it!

This is heartbreaking. Love is not enough, so often, and they tried so hard.
The analogy of 'musically gifted' is great.
Thanks for a lovely, sad story

Wow!

Wow, I feel like I've just been punched in the gut, but in a good way. This is definitely the best second-person fic I've ever read.

Whoa! Amazing exploration of muggle/wizard marriage! This was so many arguments in a very emotionally charged, but documentary-like nutshell! Great work!

I love it.

I just discovered this story and it's amazing! I did find the woman a bit annoying XD her husband was so sweet and patient, but when I find out that she has depression it makes sense. Thanks for sharing!

This was intense, massively eye opening too. Thanks for writing!

Yeah, I don't think any of these relationships ever really work out for the best, especially with such dense individuals as these. It's always hard for haves and have-nots to work together, but a demarcation so strong will always cause friction. Being trapped behind an invisible wall, from which you most want to be a part of, is utterly depressing. It's only with forethought, empathy, consideration, and endeavor can a relationship thrive. The one described here has none of that. It was doomed to fail from the very beginning. Sure, they are still together, but the love and happiness are shadows of what could have been.

It's depressing, because the only muggle-magical relationships we see are failures. Well, maybe JK only sees these impulsive and careless relationships in real life to reflect it upon her world... or her own depression is seeping in.

Oh well, I enjoyed your story anyway.

This is an incredible fan fiction- I love how different it is from almost anything else I've read. I've read quite a few of your stories, and they are all absolutely stunning. I wish I could write as well as you.

This was a magnificent piece. The writing, the character development, the plot. You don't see mental illness realistically treated in fanfiction very often, either, so that she had depression at the end was unexpected but a little dose of realism that most fanfics don't deal with.

Great job.

Lovely perspective; it seems really realistic and I like the idea that Muggle mothers can borrow their magical baby's magic.

Muggle-magic marriages/relationships are so fascinating to me. I've hardly seen any stories with it. I think you painted a really realistic portrayal of what could happen.

This reminds me of a line from an old poem or ryhme from somewhere that I can't remember, "And the Third Child is your own" I can't remember what the rest of it was but it was about an arranged marriage and the woman giving birth to three children and the third child being the only one she doesn't 'lose'. Beautifully written.

oh, and yes..

please another chapter. ]

this is well and truly the outright winner of best and most heart wrenchingly realistic fan fiction that i have read..