Update

Hi,
Wow. That was really good. I wasn't sure at first, because I don't usually read dark stories, but this one was absolutely worth it. I hated Slytherin at first but somehow by the end, even after all he did to Harry, I liked him. So, if that was your intention, good job. :) I really liked the story. It was confusing in some parts, but I was able to get the gist of it. Thank you for changing my mind about dark stories.
-Booksrlife15

i just wanted to say this is incredible and i wish it wasnt a one shot as i really want ti know what happens next

That was confusing

please write continuation

Great story I really liked it.

this is fantastic thanks so much for taking the time to write this i think its brilliant

Whoa! This was a fantastic one-shot. I adored it and I want more depicting the upcoming war and Harry's transition into Darkness. Ah, I loved it!

Seriously you need to add more to this. There isn't many good female Harry stories out there

update fam... pls its really good!

Oooh omg this is one of the most interesting things I've read in a long time. Love the subtle way harry is slowly and subtlety changing throughout, and how easily one empathises with her.
Also dumbledoor can suck it

Thank you for writing. Have a lovely day!

her name sounds like harlot...is she a harlot?

I love this story.. please continue~

This was… very good, and as promised, very dark. Once again, earned though, in a way that felt genuine. Verisimilitude again.

Interestingly enough, there seems to have been some cross-pollination with another personal Bad End favourite, Unbecoming.

Thanks for sharing.

Could you please make a part two for this, or just continue it and make it into a story. So far I am absolutely obsessed with this story and want another part of it soo bad