| Reviews for My mistakes were made for you |
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Guest chapter 40 . 6/2 "sneak peak" It's PEEK. |
Guest chapter 13 . 6/2 "I didn't want to tempt faith" You tempt FATE, not FAITH. |
Guest chapter 12 . 6/2 "I could see Libby peaking" It's PEEKING, which means "sneaking a look." |
Guest chapter 11 . 6/2 "He just kept staring at me in disbelieve." It's DISBELIEF. |
Guest chapter 10 . 6/2 "running errants" It's ERRANDS. |
Guest chapter 9 . 6/2 "Felix and I where in a meeting" It's WERE, not WHERE. |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/2 "loosing your father" It's LOSING. "Loose" means "not tight." "Lose" means "misplace." |
Guest chapter 35 . 2/12 Mb they should visit Emmett and rose for supper ? |
Guest chapter 21 . 2/11 I would be very caution around renee |
Guest chapter 41 . 1/26 In almost every story I read Bella never sticks up for herself and tells Alice no. If I don’t want to wear this or do that I’m not going to. But Bella always gives in it’s annoying af. And Libby acting like bratty Alice wouldn’t fly with me either. And if her mom is a pos she’s almost always forgiven and welcomed back. Sometimes we are better off with people in our life. Sharing blood doesn’t mean anything. Aside from my complaints which are 90% of fan fiction stories. I really liked this story |
Koe chapter 22 . 8/30/2019 Bella's insecurity is moving past pitiable and into annoying territory. |
philosopheria chapter 13 . 5/26/2018 xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxXxxxx999997Xxxxx x |
Vamps09 chapter 41 . 3/7/2018 Loved the story! |
bethabetha chapter 1 . 12/15/2017 i gave this story a shot hoping that the author’s spelling and grammar had improved since carlisle’s angels, but sadly after just one chapter i can tell they didn’t. there are so many obvious mistakes that it’s just way too distracting. can’t keep going. |
Chloe chapter 4 . 9/15/2017 "My father would hear of this"... sounds like little Draco fucking Malfoy |