This was a beautiful story! I loved I so fucking much!
:D

ITS KakaIru. HAND OVER THE COOKIES.

Hm, honestly I'm not floored with this story. I think you could write good fluff romance/humor, but not necessarily darker fics. It doesn't take only darker themes to write one in a convincing way. I don't think you managed to pull it off on A in this one. I read first half and only skimmed through the rest. The devil is in the detail, they say and those little things can sometimes ruin the fun. Naruto and Sasuke falling in love with each other in one day? Naruto hardly reacting to his new discovered sexual orientation (he could at least contemplate it a little bit, right? it's kinda life-changing revelation), sending animal in a box (let's forget fox is not a typical pet, it's risky to buy them as a surprise, but you certainly don't buy them while on a school trip!), the way Orochimaru can corner Naruto (he's not even hiding his malicious intent in front of Naruto's friends, so how could anyone not notice? Wasn't he afraid of caught, it's not like he had any real leverage to keep Naruto silent? Were there any other teachers on that trip, aside from Oro's side-kick Kabuto? It looks like those kids were left alone), I find keeping mum about Naruto going missing irresposible (since they couldn't know what condition they would find him in, if it would even possible to help him without some professional equipment, etc.), Sai and his eagerness to kill Naruto only because of rejection was weird (that surely escalated quickly out of nowhere)... list could probably go on and on, but you get the gist?
You need more realism in your future stories, it's attention to detail that makes good fics great.

I'm barely on chapter three, and to be honest, I don't like it when they say the "L" word the same day they meet (or next day, not quite sure). I think it would be more romantic if they said it at the perfect moment near the ending. Though I don't know when that moment is, there's always a moment.

Other then that, I love the fact that it has yuri in it. I don't really read that much yuri, mind you, but I think they are an adorable couple. When I do read yuri, I always read the soft kind. You know, no finger fucking, no lemons or lime. I only read yaoi lemons and lime. Yuri fluff is better is my book. You really get my in to yuri more. Haha.

And also, the story is good, but you should fix those run ons.

"They're teachers, let's follow their example." That sentence made me fall out of my chair laughing! XD Aside from that, this story had a good plot, a believable storyline, hilarious situations, wonderful tear-jerking moments,an amazing climax, a beautiful ending, and very few, if any grammar mistakes. Oh, and great smex scenes. :3 Conclusion:yet another story to add to my favorites. 4 out of 4 stars!

young love... :3

IS NARUTO GOING TO DIE?! He better not die! Not after all that he's been through! -wails- DON'T DIE ON ME NARUTO! q_q

That would be waaay too scary for me. I would be freaking out!

oh that smex /o3o/

Kit is so cute! So cute that I could kidnap him from his 'parents'. Perhaps I should...

OH MY GERD How could no one have noticed that? -.-

Are they going to...?

That plane turbulence... It just gets you every time.

j'ai adoré cette fics, je l'ai lu d'une traite, tous les 10 chapitres je pouvais pas m'arrêter
je vous remercie j'ai vraiment passé un super moment

Will there b a sequel?