That proposal was beautiful. I actually cried for a second reading that.

You, good sir, are a scholar and a gentleman.

Naruto is a genin just like Sasuke, you dumb fag. And no way in hell would Sakura ever touch your fugly selfinsert Lee. Kill yourself, pathetic virgin.

Well haku had a bloodline but the yuki ninja did not. Haku could create and manipulate ice with a mix of wind and water chakra but yuki ninja could only manipulate existing ice and snow. It might interest you to know kakashi could also do this

The word is hiteate or forehead protector. Headband works just as well though

I enjoy reading your stories very much thank you for sharing your gift with all the readers on this site.

I liked this story while it lasted and I really enjoyed how the last chapter went the most. I do have to admit that I didn’t like that whole obay bit in Hinata’s part of the wedding vows though. Other then that part I thought the whole story was really good.

Nice premise so far but very cliche. A name involved with a fox totally wouldn't be obvious that it's Naruto. Couldn't you have come up with a better name, something more original? I like the story but the name is my only real complaint since I see this so often and it's a glaring fault since the name is way too obvious

What the fuck is this stupid shit! You made Naruto into a total bitch with konha as the pimp.

When Hinata goes to pet Naruto's ears here, i can't help but think of Kagome doing the same to Inuyasha XD

Damn good story glad Naruto got everything he was looking for in life anyways keep up the great work!

But sasuke HASN'T "earned it".(never did)... His very speech is AGAINST the final he worked himself hard, BUT SO DID EVERYBODY ELSE... Its NOT ENOUGH... and he CHOSE his own actions of crime, he CHOSE to go against the village and side with a KNOWN traitor, he CHOSE to side with the akutski, THEN he CHOSE to commit war crimes against another village.. I'm sorry but there IS only ONE fate for ALL that. You SAY "bloodlines don't matter", but your actions are completely against that (seems common to the naruto series).. he NEEDS to die.. Period. After all... By teaching him after ALL that, isn't THAT "special treatment because of his bloodline"? .besides it's NOT "bashing" if it's ALL TRUE... I don't think sasuke deserves to live because this wouldn't BE a "second chance".. His "second chance" came when naruto wanted to bring him back, his "third chance" came after he killed orochimaru, his "fourth chance" came after he killed his brother but before he joined the akutski...STARTING TO SEE A THEME HERE?

zetsu's combat abilities? Next to NON-EXISTENT. Seriously, konohamaru could kick his butt.
And as far as IWA?.. ALL the nations vs. IWA? It would be SUICIDE for them... So far as I can tell they would say: GOOD RIDDANCE to his old ass, last of the GERIATRIC rules are GONE! "DING DONG the wicked witch is dead" (I've noticed that SOMEHOW, the naruto series seems to equate agestupidity and EVIL.) fanfics often deviate from this, but USUALLY they keep the underlying theme as a whole.

Actually the Mizukage is Mei now (by the time of this story) the LAST mizukage was KINDA obedito in that he was controlling him, but that ended (along with his life) by mei's hand. I kinda always figured that it was obitedo behind the mask, because can u see ANY uchiha covering up one of their "precious" eyes? It just doesn't fit with their personalities AT ALL.

I always thought, sasuke, and the uchiha in general as a clan are more of a DISEASE then "friends or enemies", you don't try to "save" hepatitis you just eradicate it and let the patient (the world) heal.

Give up? YES that would be the BEST IDEA out of a lot of bad ones, "go commit seppuku" would be another GREAT suggestion for them. But that would take BRAINS (which the akutski is SORELY lacking on)There are PLENTY of other "bad guys" in the naruto verse if the akutski decided on mass suicide... Shinnō that tried to harness the zero-tails, the demon from the first shippuden movie, (an ACTUAL demon), the "chimera" guy from the "Will of Fire", Haido from the west (in the stone of gellel) Heck for that matter, the ENTIRE west (since they seem to be up to steam-punk tech), Kazum who led the ZOMBIE attack in the shippuden series. I COULD go on, but you get the idea, the akutski are just a tired "legion of doom" knock off.