This was really cute and had me cracking up the whole time lol. Good job

"when in doubt, end it with Fax"?. . . now thats a great modo :)

-Zoxy

MICROWAVE POP FROGGIES! I love it!

OOOH, pre-series Fax, very unheard of, very nice...

Jade Night

This is pure genius. It it so funny. I was reading it and I started to laugh, making all of my family members look at me like I was crazy. Oh well. What can you do?

Anyway, I love it! It's super funny and I will most definitely be checking out your other work. :D

Ohmygod. I love this story. I love it so freakin' much. THERE ARE NO WORDS FOR HOW MUXB I LOVE IT. YOU HAVE NO IDEA.

when i was little, i knocked our hamster out.

That... was beautiful. My favorite part was the page breaks. And the flirtatious Fang. ;)

OMG. This was so good! :D

I love it when people can actually write good family flock episodes. :) It was a bit faxy and it was hilarious. ;)

Keep up the good work!

Oh my god, your writing sounds exactly like J Patterson and Max sounds exactly how she should sound like. I love the ending of the chapter!

i dont think i remember him blowing up maxs pants but i think in the 1rst book she said something about being madder than the time iggy cut up her favorite pants to make the longest fuse...hope that helps sorry :)

this is so funny and the last part made me goo awww out loud which caused my whole entire familey to race over which then made me go all murder-war-KILL mode, but i love it abousolutly loved it the last part is incredabley sweet. your a really good writer

This story was so great! I litterly fell over laughing great idea 4 settings, the hole 9 yrds! hope to find more of ur stories!thnx!

Loved every minute of it! creative and funny and so true, when in dout, end with fax!

That was awesome. I loved the end, with her little realization. Not to mention the whole thing was funny and very well written. Excellent job! )