That was...underwhelming TBH. I get that this is an old fic and one of your first extended ones but damn you put a lot of buildup into the fight with Koh and...that’s it? Ok

Great story

well it is a master piece, there isn't anything i can say about it

Toradora moment

This story was quite nice. Some parts were a little scechy... Overall I understood what the auther was trying to prevail. Unfartuneatly I found the end to be quite rushed and unexplained. Never the less the plot was pleasent, but I was hoping for a strictly Zutara romance where I was just them but I was comitted to finishing it. Thankyou so much for the entertainment. :)

Very nice on this story. I really enjoyed it. Hope the sequel is up to par with this one. I will read

I LOVE THIS FAN FIC SO MUCH ITS MY ABSOLUTE FAVORITE

This actually turned out okay. Just a couple points.
a) Zutara. I really don't like the pairing. Then again I don't really like Kataang either. Anyways, I firmly believe that all ships can be written well. Or horribly. Most Zutaras I have read ARE horrible. A lot of Kataangs I have read are also horrible. However, I really liked your making Zuko and Katara's attraction to each other gradual. But I firmly believe it was still a bit rushed.
b) Taang. This ship I actually do like somewhat. I thought it was a bit more rushed than Zutara. However, I have always thought of it as a fun ship, so I still like it.

I just have to say I love your story so far. Momo makes me so happy

S- Zutara Smut
E- Everlasting Love (Zutara)
X- X, the shape I drew on Kaang. (Katara Aang Murderous Fans)

I want Momo.
Toph arranged marriage.
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1 word.

SEX.

I want SEX!

What the hell! Why doesn't Ursa go bk 2 da F-Nation so she can b w/ Z.

It's Ba Sing Se.
Kanna (Gran-Gran) was Kya (Katara's Mother)'s mom, not Hakoda's.
Avatar Kyoshi was an only child, nice creativity, though.
Suki was Avatar Kyoshi's cousin's third descendant.