BRADY NO. MY SON. MY HEART I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO.

Ah the feels. Thanks so much for sharing it was great

Is this the end? I love the name Neyeli it is my sister's name. Mahalo,Leilani

I'm crying...can you hear my sobs?

Anyways, this story is amazing! You are such a great writer and I really hope you continue.

Aww

Please update soon

Omfg please continue!

Awwwwwwww that's so cute

Well you haven't updated in a couple years, you should update soon. I really like this story even though it swears...anyway, ya update soon?

Heyy!

Its Sofia! :D

I'd like to start off by saying that I really LOVED your Fiction!

Its really good!

Aside from the spelling errors, I felt that this Fiction seemed very rushed.

But from what I understand, in the first couple chapters, you were trying to refrain from rushing.

In the first couple chapters, the pace was really good, not to fast, not to slow.

Then after she admitted that she loved Paul, it just rushed from there.

What I mean is then afterwards, i'm guessing that they were already having sex? If thats what you meant to imply. And from what I can recall, they got together about a week before Sam and Emily's wedding.

Talk about rushed hahaha :]

Then that same night, they get in the car accident [which I cried on! D:] that was very upsetting. :[[

Then after that, Brady imprints, AND that same day his imprint turns into a vampire. And from what I can recall from the Twilight books, and I quote, 'It takes about three days for the transfermation to becoming a Vampire to be completed.' And it happened in the matter of a couple short hours? That threw me off. :

AND THEN, Brady's imprint kills him? I thought it would be painfull to physically, and mentally hurt your imprint. Even though they were newly imprinted, she should of at least felt the pull, right? Obviously Brady did, I mean he did protect her, I was royaly pissed when she killed him! :P

AND THEN! As soon as Brady dies, Emily has pregnancy complications. I didn't really understand that. So they deliver the baby and name him Brady. AWWW! :D

So the baby looks like Brady? :D

And again, from what I understand Emily would've had to of given birth to Brady in a matter of a couple of minutes.

The reason?

Sam and Emily left, Paul and Nayeli left right after Sam and Emily left about 5 minutes earlier, then thay arrive and Lil' Brady is already in the nursery. So i'm guessing that Paul and Nayeli drive REALLY slow. :]] hahaha Loved it! :D

I love your story, and the conflicts within it! I still hate it when Brady dies... So young. I'm still crying, so I'm gonna stop talking now. Love the story, though!

One of the most beautiful imprint fanfictions I've ever read.

I literally cried through the last few chapters you posted and I hope you update soon :)

awwww

oh my god...not Brady!He was like a little brother! Im not going to lie I cried. I like almost never cry, like NEVER, not even when I broke my wrist and they had to reset the bone, but Brady diening, that got to me...it was so freaking heart breaking! And Brady isnt even my favourite wolf!

OMG you killed BRADY! And brought him back in a way...you have a really amazing story when Emily started bleeding I was like if that baby is dead to it's gonna be bad.