it was fun reading but renesmee never cried

Yea emmett would be a dog hands down easy so this entire thing was pointless

In character. And. Really. Well. Done.

amazing story... luv it especially the end

very nice story

update plz

cool

That was great... THank you for sharing

Very beautiful, my dear! Your words are so poignant and eloquent, merely breath-taking! I loved the way you wrote this - It really inspired Emmett's actions and proved much success to this story. Kudos to you! I just adore Emmett and you captured his character beautifully!

Again, thank you for composing this story! It was a great read! Beautifully composed and exquisite! Great job and keep on writing! :D

pretty awesome story

just one question...i thought vamps didnt have bones...it was just random other strong metallic stuff inside them. I could be wrong but Jake broke Rosalie's wrist...i am presuming that this is like how you can pull apart a vamp then put them back together, right? so then why is it a bone?

that was just a little question for a great story

love it!

Very, very cute

for once, i'm actually glad to see Bella win

and Nessie is truly adorable here :)

Great Job!

This was a great story, and I love how you represented Emmett. I mean, of course it was good, it's in the "Best of Emmett" Community. But I'm so sick of seeing him portrayed as a child, and having Rosalie act like his mother! Sure, he's immature, but...uugh.

Lol. All in all, great story, and sorry about the rant

go Emmett!