Reviews for Trying
CagedHeart7 chapter 1 . 9/26
I..uh..it was a great story. Really. Many a times I've thought that Hinata deserved more than Naruto. Neji is a great choice and if they were someone else, their budding romance despite of hard, disciplined exterior and shyness would've been something strainght out of a fairytale. But I just couldn't get the image of little Hinata calling Neji 'niisan' out of my head. Marriages in clan are common, I know but their dads were twins! Great story though. The fault is totally mine for overthinking ;_;
HyugaSecondYoungMaster chapter 1 . 5/9
GOSH it's soo beautiful.. I wish there's more chapter
Lorna chapter 1 . 3/7/2019
This is so beautiful, I am completely in love with it!
All the emotions you elicit are so complex and flushed out. I really enjoyed the vulnerability you drew out of Neji & Hinata. I adore your style, you make me love NejiHina all the more!
Thank you so much for sharing!
FancySycamoreTree chapter 1 . 6/22/2017
Very lovely. Thanks for this!
SoCoCoCrazy chapter 1 . 11/15/2016
i wasn't sure if I would like the pairing but this was amazing. for someone who wouldn't put them together ever your writing made it realistic enough that it made sense and acknowledge everything before hand. things were awkward weird and uncomfortable and perfect. :) loved the writing definitely a favorite!
ksuzu chapter 1 . 8/4/2016
The first time I read this, it was too sad, so I didn't favorite it. What a mistake. This is gorgeous, and the phrasing and pacing makes it a standout. ;_;
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2016
amazing!
anne chapter 1 . 7/26/2015
that was really good. thanks for the read.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/27/2015
NejiHina é vida.
ChoppingBoard chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
very nicely written. good job on pacing the development of romantic feelings between the two :)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/20/2014
i love this fic...i so love nejihina romance story
El Reino chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
This was so freaking beautiful. I wish I had more to say, something better but I don't know... I read this before and after my class this afternoon and I remember being so sad but so hopeful throughout the whole thing. Your writing is very beautiful and I remember wondering: "The relationship was already there, why *can't* they fall in love?"

I really appreciate this work, thanks for writing!
LilithiaRW chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
Oh wow this is amazing! I love NejiHina. I realize that in the Naruto-verse the possibility of Hinata being allowed to marry outside the clan is slim, and given Neji's prowess, he could be a candidate for her to marry. So from a realistic point of view of the feudal shinobi countries, this is a power couple!
Sarah chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
This was really beautiful. Everyone was in character and I could totally see this scenario and how Neji's and Hinata's emotions and coming to terms played out. Loved it.
Violetta-Night Butterfly chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
Beautiful, absolutely beautiful!

I love how natural and sweet this is for Neji and Hinata. So cute and... Real for lack of better world lol

Excellent job it's amazing. :)
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