I have very much enjoyed your story. I can only say, I'm sad that I've finished it. The journey found within these pages has, like all journeys, been so much more delightful than simply arriving at a destination. Thank you.

Too wordy .. it becomes too bore with word unneeded .. but great plot though :)

Thank you for posting! It is always a treat to find well-written stories that keep everybody in character )

Dear lord you're an amazing writer. I was enraptured with both your stories, and I'm so glad I stumbled across them some years later. I was hanging on every word and I want to thank you for writing something so utterly fascinating and true to characters like these two. I hated and loved them both, that it just brought the two to life. Ah I wish I had more clever adjectives to explain my love for this story, but alas I went to art school.

Now that I'm done gushing my love to you, I shall be perusing your other stories.

Thank you for such an astonishing, stupefying, breathtaking, stupendous tale. (Yeahhh thesaurus)

this has to be the best love story ever! i laughed, cried (which i never do), became angry & giggled and now sit with a cheesey grin on my face...:D

OMG, great!

intense chapter!

Woo! I loved this! Great story, and thank you!

Enjoyable! Funny thing with that celibate lady. XD

Great chapter! I eagerly await his escape. I... I hope he escapes!

How terminally sad!

Great chapter!

Oh my! Great chapter!

Exciting!

Oh no, things just are going well for our heroes!