You know, this is how should have been in the canon! Such a cute and fluff story! And I think the characterization is spot on! I loved it!

Chica, acabas de escribir con exactitud lo que me gustaria haber visto en la boda que nos mostró Kishimoto si Neji no hubiese muerto. Realmente eres espectacular para los NejiTen

D'awww x)

I love the not-so-subtle flirting from Neji. And all the smirking. I feel like that's what he'd do if he wasn't a frigid ass (no offence, Neji. Love ya).
Thank you for this!

Just plain CUTE!

Not too bad! It was pretty cute and sweet. :)

["You know I wouldn't miss the wedding of our beloved Rokudaime." She said.] End dialogue with a comma instead of a period. Also, when the word immediately following the dialogue isn't a proper noun, it should be lowercase.

[A look of surprise flashed in Tenten's eyes, but she gave him a smile and nodded quietly, turning around to examine the colorful disarray of flowers as if it was the most interesting thing in the hall.] "was" should be "were".

I think you got Neji's and Tenten's characters spot on here. And it was cute, too! I'm usually not a fan of fluff, but this was just adorable. I love how the NaruHina wedding gave way to all the NejiTen moments, and especially the dance. I've always seen Neji as being gentlemanly and, since he's a member of the Hyuuga clan and a genius, I figured he'd know how to dance and flower arrange and stuff like that. The end was so cute, too! :)

Beautiful... just beautiful

nope it wasn't that off...and I enjoyed this oneshot

Lovely!

AWWWWWWWW

Really, I love this fanfic *o*
It's perfect, you write very well (:

hahaha it was fun reading this :D

That was so sweet! It was realy nice to read.

Five thumbs uup! ) )