I know you were trying to be original but the story is very stupid. I kept going on because I thought you might get better or do better but you continue to disappoint me. You had had Naruto’s eyes ripped out and you had him experimented on. And we’re not even going to go into what happen with the other characters. This chapter was completely ridiculous The Hyuga Family would never adopt anybody especially since they keep enslaving their own family. They’re too high and mighty to adopt a child even though that child has been suffering his whole life. Also Naruto would never go with them especially after you’ve already traumatized him so much. You’re making too many mistakes and you’ve really messed up the story.

instead of using naruto to begin you should of had that scene as a flashback and had showed it when they noticed him all bloody

Type your review you end the fic that orochi and kabuto not beibg punish u writer should kill ur self or all of ur female relative i mean any dna female relative u have should experience being rape in front of you just die useless human being

is no one annoyed that after all the beatings and all the pain his gone through and even when he didn't reacted with the first beatings of the story that he was in pain when someone grabbed his head and slammed it into the ground like really it should are been a grunt or something not pain I hate it how people do that with their story's

please continue this. I really like how it's progressing so far, and I can't wait for more

Ch 15
Not bad . With that eye is Death Strike . But is a bit risky to who ? Update please.

Ch 10 SHINIGAN?

What the fuck is wrong with you, you sick asshole

All the hell of being raped and forcefully bred and then denied the child and neither Hikari herself or Ume awoke the Tensaigen or Rinnegan as a result?

The only reason why kakashi is training sasuke is because he facing garra a jinchuuriki.

The ability to rip someone's soul from there body , Obsorb it and gain the techniques and knowledge from said soul.

Nice, finally someone steps up to protect Naruto. He needs it to recover from all this... horror. I wasn't expecting an OC Kyuubi no Kitsune/ Kurama, now Yoko. But I like it, its suits this story more or less.

Would you finish up on the torture already? It would be nice for Naruto to kick their asses before they kill off anyone else.

I'm sorry it was a great fix but I couldn't stand the fact that the kyubbi was a girl. Not that he couldn't be a girl but that it had a girl form I know it's fanfiction but that was going to constantly bug me with the Kyushu going girl every few seconds. This also happened in a similar fic (I won't say the name for private reasons) where he constantly transformed into a dudes body all the time and it annoyed me. Like that one transformation was ok but I could just predict that this would become conclude this is still a amazing fix and I may come back to it but for now I'm an abandoner.

To bad naruto is still weak. I mean pathetic. I mean dude forgets how to tun and jump and chakra pathetic