I just hate all that glass in Mac's office sometimes and this is one of the instances. You make me want a sequel about what happened after they left all that glassed in splendor behind.

I liked this.

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Wonderful story! That was really sweet of Mac! That poor girl!

Thank you for writing this wonderful Mac/Stella story! I love how Mac notices how upset Stella is, and how he goes out of his way to make everything better! What a great guy!

OMG, how AH-DORABLE! This story is so cute, and it's awesome!

Ooh, such a lovely story! I would've written something very M with the prompts given but you succeeded in writing something very sweet and adorable.

Nice story.. And quite nice idea in office picnic.. D!

That was unbelievably beautiful. You captured their relationship so well. I hope you'll write more M/S fics in the near future.

That was really lovely, I enjoyed reading it so much, from the darkness at the beginning to the hope and possibility at the end, and of course the deep friendship Mac and Stella have for each other. Beautifully written, please write some more soon!

On reading your AN I thought 'what?' - you really did a great job with those prompts! Really liked Stella's thoughts on the victim. Loved how Mac avoided her eyes at certain times, but then in the end looks at her so intensely, and for a moment she has to look away. Such a wonderful idea to cheer her up, and I loved the implication of the last line :)

... DAMN! forgot this isn't msn. well anyway, I LOVE IT! *dances* it's wonderful. great work! x