oh Jason it never leaves the system! i love how even though he's doing his hardest he can't pull himself away from the case lol and as for the question you asked me the conversion flowed nicely and i didn't notice mush of a change from the other chapters compared to the new ones

So excited when I got the email from you about an update! Love the chapter! I can't wait to read more

are you going to continue this? i would love to see what happens to Jason, i really hope it gets soreted out so he can go back to living in peace

You've written the beginnings of a very nice story here. Your writing is sophisticated and detailed without being overly verbose. Your characterization has injected new life into familiar faces without breaking any of the characters. Finally, it seems you've actually done a bit of research for the construction of the background case; it makes the situation more believable.

I know you haven't updated in a while, but I hope you find the time and inspiration to continue. It'd be a shame if you stopped here.

-Basil

This was good. Hotch has got Gideon interested. I hope he starts working with him and Morgan.

I am so happy that Phillips found out who Isaac really is. That was sweet of Jj to name her baby after Gideon. I just so wish that Reid was there to be with Gideon. They both need each other and always will. I am glad that Phillips has asked Gideon for his help. I look forward to the next chapter.

Good work so far, I love Hotch and Morgan stories! Keep it up!

This was good. I was afraid that Gideon would just go off at that Phillips guy and I would not blame him. Hotch is ever the diplomat and was a friend to Gideon. I hope the guy stricks again while Gideon is in the jail so they will know that it is not him.

The only reference I notice and I am not good at things like that is: Chevy Tahoe, MagLight flashlight and of course Phillips could be for the screwdriver.

Looking forward to more.

oh, yeah morgan llknow hotch's mystery man:) hahaxd very interesting!

That gives you chills thinking the killer was at the car while they were on the mountain. I hope everything is going OK with Gideon.

This is getting really good. My heat did a double take when he said Black Talon bullets. I hate that. I am looking forward to more Gideon.

That was an AWESOME Chapter. I'm glad that Hotch went ahead and

sent Morgan back to town to go to sleep. I'm also glad that Hotch

and Phillips went to talk to Gideon about what has happend and is

still happening. I hope that Morgan will be able to come up with

some info when he starts talking to Garcia and the Cops in the

next County over. I just hope that Gideon will talk to Hotch and

Phillips. Keep up the AWESOME Writing. Can't wait to read the

next Chapter. THANK YOU!

Such a good story. i love reading what Gideon was thinking. He is more Gideon then he really wants to be. He can never put it all behind him, as he said he is tempted. Hotch is such a good friend to Gideon. I just hope they can help him by letting him help them. I think you selected just the right music for this chapter.

Good story. I like the story-line. I am glad that Hotch didn't tell Morgan. I do wish that Reid was there.

oh, god. gideon is the GIDEON? oh what the reversal! im surprised