*screams for eternity*

This hurts, fudge. Did Kakashi... did he choose to go on a suicide mission? It's strange that Minato 'suddenly feels drowsy'. and dammit thank you for writing this beautifully angsty piece.

So much angst oh my god you broke my heart. This was such a pretty fic, and I love it so much okay.

Listen I read this fic when I was in middle school (like 2011 or smth) and it completely blew me out of the water like 13 yr old me was completely astounded bc the whole idea/structure of the backwards greiving process and having this whole thing resemble a play w the acts and stuff was so new and unique tht it really stuck with me. (also the fact that the emotions in this is so spot on and the details are so graphic and this fic stayed with me since I read it) but I randomly remembered it 5 years later and I told my friends about That One Fic that stayed w me for years and I tried SO HARD but for some reason I couldnt find it and I didn't know the title so for some reason I thought you deleted and I was just so sad. But I found it again and its just as good as I remember. So like, you've reached fanfiction hall of fame by doing something so unique and new tht I just can't forget about this. Seriously, ever since I read this I've tried to incorporate this style into my writing but I don't think I've managed to recreate it yet. So thanks for still inspiring me all these years later (almost 8 years since you wrote this! wow).

Those last three lines just- HNGNHGNGG.

Well, wasn't this angsty. Excuse me while I cry

o.O

You've probably heard this a lot of times already, but that was fantastic.

I love how you wrote it somewhat as a play, with the breaks in between scenes - it adds to some sort of poetic atmosphere to it all :P

And I love how you wrote Minato! Easy to forget that even the mighty Hokage is human.

thats...so...SAD!

:)

Poor Kakashi :'(. Good fanfic tho.

Oh my gosh, this is amazing. Seriously, I cried buckets when I read this. Kakashi didn't deserve to die like that. And poor, poor Minato. How it must hurt to lose all three of your students. Would you consider doing something like this about Rin? I know that we don't really know a lot about her, but that is precisely why I'm asking.

Sincerely,

V.C.

so beautifully sad and insane :)

Heart breaking...so much emotion...I was inspired to write a fanfiction hopefully you'll take the time to read the ideas of a writer who loves your work.

I found this both articulate and enjoyable - and incredibly vivid of course. There was a confident authorial voice throughout that made it flow just perfectly - even if the author notes erred on the side of conceit from time to time, although not entirely undeservedly I might add. Kakashi dying is I prospect I never even like to imagine, let alone read about. But then again, I'm determined to accord with the beliefs of act one - plot device or otherwise. Well, ether way, an excellently written story, capturing each character's essence very close to perfectly.

Good job,

Esa'