It was a great read. i am sad that it doesn't seem to explain everything in the end. Like Toph and Aang after they left. I get Azula was starting to loose it again. But is Mai every caught? stuff like that. But I liked the journey it took me on

My heart hurts reading the end of this chapter

Oooh! This was so nice to read! The end is perfect!

I really like your story, but why is Katara so thirsty? This is her second time seeing Zuko in four years and already she's trying to have sex with him. She had her first kiss with Zuko after FOUR years and she automatically thinks "oh he wants to have sex with me" and then gets hurt when she's told no. If I was in Zuko's position and a guy tried to do that to me, I would be freaked out. Overall, I really like your story amd can't wait to continue reading :D

Great story

Poor Ursa. I am kinda shocked at her though, Iroh was at least twice her age.

Awesome story

Oh man that was wonderful!

Lol!

I really enjoyed this story! I couldn't put it down once I started it so I am so glad I stumbled across it and that you decided to share it with us. Thank you for the journey :) I really do hope that u will get around to writing the sequel one day.

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A-w-e-s-o-m-e story! I love it! Very well written! And the characters ... can I have them?

Keep up writing :)

Shine on

Wow that was really good. Im suprised this diesent have many reviews... what about our sequel? Haha i lived it !

Awww... Papakoda understands.

I saw this story rec'd on a Zutura ff list and I've been enjoying it so much. I really the development between Zuko and Katara. I like how it took them a while to come to this point.

This union was perfect for them. It was done really well. You captured Katara's uncertainty really well and I liked that Zuko was patient and very caring.

Thank you for writing it this way for them.