Whoa... Oh my. I am simply at a loss for words... Nobody else has done that before... This is... Wow.

This is good too

To even reconize this Jessie has good in her.I personally thinl brcause the now blissey that knew jessie when blissey was chancy by fact they got on so well Jessie deep down is a caring person. Honestly sadly in world we live in many ppl have the me me me attitude but tjat dosent make 1 evil. Tell Jessie if she was truly evil she'd havr killed james and meowth long ago.

Just... amazing. There aren't even enough words to describe how amazing this really is...

Wow! It was very profound and conclusive. You characterised Jessie how she really could be. I liked the way how clear she sees herself. And of course it was well linked to the happenings we know from the Anime and the movies.

Well, I'm searching for the right phrases to express how impressed I am but unfortunately I'm too stupid (and also too tired - it's 4 in the morning), sorry.

I totally agree with my forerunners - you did a very good job.

I hope it's clear what I tried to say. I just wanted to leave you a comment because I think this story deserves much more attention and more reviews.

Sorry for any grammar/vocab/ spelling mistake, I'm still studying English

Aww. *hugs Jessie*

You can work it out, girl.

That's so angsty v_v

Jessie's sharp, snappy, and acid-tongued- perfectly true to character. Aha, you wrote my favorite character perfectly!

This is kind of adorable.

-It's almost like having my own life-size dress-up doll. Eat your heart out, Barbie: I have a James.-

Ah, but of course, it quickly takes a turn for the depressing.

(Did I mention I loved how you had her repeatedly point out that she's "evil" as if we'd forget? Is she trying to assure us or herself?)

Though, there's a bit of a grammatical mistake here:

-with with Meowth at least on the other side of a door-

-And then I held my best friend in front of me, a human shield.-

Ouch.

I really like how that was written. Abrupt in a good way.

The ending was horribly depressing.

Beautifully captured.

I love the way you wrote Jessie's character in this, she is mean but very very real. You really dig deep into the depths of Jessie's character and explain in her point of view true to form. My favorite part is:

"I'm not James's true love. I'm just the first person he's gotten close to who's a little bit better than Jessebelle or his horrid parents. I'm bad enough to give him what he's used to (scorn, orders, mild abuse) but not bad enough to want to...eat him alive, like they do."

Very angsty, this bit helps to prove she is conscious of how she treats him and isn't oblivious to his painful history of abuse. Makes her denied love for him more plausible and real. I also love the part:

"Rockets have no sentiment, no pity, no remorse. It's entirely appropriate to shift the blame onto your partner to save your own miserable hide. It's expected. Hiding behind your best friend (who just outdid himself to make you happy) is par for the course.

It doesn't matter that it makes me cringe to remember it. It doesn't stop me from DOING it. I don't even DECIDE to do it...I just DO it."

I love that about Jessie's character, her almost complete lack of a conscious.

Another great bit of fanfiction, hope to see more! _!