Amazing take on the cliche wrong bwl. I love this version, probably tenfold times better than mine. I like you're writing, very nice flow to it. Your fanfic is an example of what I mean by 'a good fanfic doesn't need lots of words' because you were able to nail a excellent fanfic without needing to write lots of chapters.

Well written and nice plot twist.

yessss i love fics like this thank you

Cute enough, and the irony was dead on (if a tad extreme), but the ending fell flat for me. Just who WAS his apprenticeship with? And, powerful or not, how did he manage to leave the office without either exiting through the door or being able to apparate through Hogwarts' vaunted wards?

Nice! Puppetmaster had the string cut by the puppet. :)

I hope you are doing well, and having time, health and energy to write. With and abundance of money also.

I hope you post in your chapters if you write something for sale.

serves them right!

Espero que continues con la historia pronto por favor gracias

more more!

Motherfucker why is some good stories always like this? One shot, abandoned or copied by some whack job who makes harry a half vampire, half veela and gay. No offense to gay people but fuck it it is not the harry potter we know and want. Even if its fiction doesn't mean you can go and shit all over the place with your fucked up asshole like brain.

This was good! Loved that dramatic exit.

lol so quick

I like it, i would love to read the aftermath!

Oh mygosh...this is amazing! Go harry!

WONDERFUL STUFF

Please finish this story. No back story needed, just take up from here.