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Ah I love this so much! Perfect writing, I adored every word

This story is so brilliant. I found Vassalord nearly a year ago and never thought to find fics on it til now, Im very happy this was my first, its beautiful and you caught their characters perfectly... with any luck we'll have new volumes of it soon but 'til then I hope I find more fics like yours, thanks! x

Wow, just wow. Your story was so amazing I signed up just to review it. I've been a long time fan of Vassalord and read many fanfics but this is by far the very best and detailed story that actually makes sense to the story, even to the present canon.

Great use of the complicated characters, love it all, i could spend an hour saying how much i liked each thing but I'll just stick to saying i couldn't find a single flaw.

Wonderful writing

Wow...just wow...

It's so breathtakingly beautiful. You really got them both very in-character, an considering you wrote this solely based on the first volume only...marvelous!

And I was really captivated at the part where Charley refused to tell his master because 'his pride got in the way' (or something along those lines)

Thank you for sharing this amazing story, I wish to see more of your work on Vassalord in the future, :D

I hope you wouldn't mind if I list it as my favorite :D~

I have to admit, I really do enjoy this story. I kinda hope you think of a way to continue it or get an idea for another Vassalord fic from it

I absolutely love this story. I really didn't expect to find such a jewel among such a small selection of fanfiction for Vassalord, but here I am! This was well written and well thought out. I enjoyed it massively, so, on that note, I'm hoping you have written more stories.

But oh do I know what you mean! There are more Vassalord manga out now, but I read the first one and I've already started thinking of different ideas for fanfictions. Beautiful job on this, and I'm hoping so much that you wrote more fics!

Precious. I absolutelly love the ending :)) The idea of boredom was so original, too. Go on writing stories!

Wow!

I love it!

:D

aw! for being written with only the first volume as reference, this is an excellent fanfiction! It wonderfully explains charley's actions and touches upon an important topic of vampire life, making it seem a bit more realisitc. 3 A wonderful fanfic!

This is an awesome story! You write Rayflo and his Cherry so well! :) Here's an idea, you don't have to use it, but I'd like to see another story from Rayflo's point of view about the events mentioned in this story! I think it would be great to find out what happened after Charley passed out in the flashback, and what Rayflo was feeling during the it! _ If I just inspired you, YAY!

this was really really good.

Ow wow! I am a huge fan of Vassalord and had no idea till now that there was fanfiction for it.

ANd this work was very good. Very good indeed. YOu captured them both wonderfully and in truth, I loved your insight.

BRavo!

Very well done. I'm intrigued with your knowledge of the characters, and I have a suggestion. You don't have to do anything with it, but I am curious about Charley's, um...heritage. If he was turned before he became a cyborg, what kind of damage would have been done to his body, that he couldn't repair it as a vampire? Or was he a cyborg before being turned? Or was it perhaps a voluntary decision on his part? I would be really interested in your take on this. Thank you for a wonderful story.

A very enjoyable reading in a fandom with far too few good fanfictions. Your characterization of both Rayflow (wath little we see of him) and Cherry is so perfect !

The connection between them is really well depicted. And the contradiction between Cherry's beliefs and his fellings for his master are spot on I think.

I find the whole idea intereesting : Cherry trying to keep Rayflow away from boredom...

Thank you for this great fanfiction I hope you continue writing in this fandom !