I'm going to guess that some of what Harry remembers, the story and baby , is from when HE was a baby and his parents read to him and he was coo'd over. I'm enjoying this one, and like the others, hope that you will one day finish it. It is a bit fast paced but thats about the only critique I have at this time.

I wanna know where Harry learnt the word baby! This story is adorable and I love it, it’s a shame you’ve abandoned it

This story is so good! You are really talented and are portraying the characters as actual people with real thoughts and feelings and I find that so impressive! I hope this fic continues!

Pity it stopped

Seriously, many stories are inspired by others. Just give credit where credit is due or like another writer, in the disclaimer, say you are not sure where the inspiration has come from as it has many sources and say that you will give credit if it is brought to your attention. AND CARRYING ON WRITING!

Dumbledore needs to be stripped of everything. Which includes all three jobs. And stripped of all of his assets and sent to prison for what is left of his natural life including stripping him of his magic. Plus the Dursleys also need to be sent to prison along with losing Dudley. Plus Marge should be sent to prison. But that's not all I would also apply corporal punishment a full spanking across their backsides to reinforce that what they did was wrong and criminal and I would beat them in the nude to make them get the full impact of skin on skin or a spanking paddle on the skin. I know a lot of people are against corporal punishment but I have met too many where that was the only way to get across what they did wrong. because of everything else just didn't work or at least not very long because they would go back and repeat the wrongdoing all over again.

I would love to read more! Great story so far!

Awww Harry and a baby too cute! :)

Ha who would of thought there be a baseball loving rapper house elf? XD too funny
and Harry tooo cute!

Please update. This is a great story and I wish it would be continued.

Great story love how harry reacts to everyone and how he dosent know better

Please update I really want to find out what happens next! Xxxxxxxxxxxx

I really wish this was updated!

the house elf is hilarous

awww so cute