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SusanCullen chapter 2 . 8/30/2010 you said she had a force field? maybe you should a one shot about her learning to control her power. Another one could be about her and edward getting into a relationship and another could be about rosalie and bella getting really close because rosalie tells bella about what happened to her. Hope that helps for ideas. I absolutely love your stories. Your an amazing writer. |
Misahru-chan chapter 2 . 2/27/2010 No sequels? I understand that. I'd like to see a one-shot about what she thinks about Edward's love and how she reciprocrates it. Congratulations again Misahru-chan |
high-off-skittles-XP chapter 2 . 11/17/2009 I think a story would be awesome! but oneshots are ok too. Just do whatever you want to :) l8r g8r ~high~off~skittles~XP~ |
Feenrai chapter 2 . 10/2/2009 Just one shots huh? That could be interesting...I think you should go more into her powers...and actually, I DO have a story for you. You could totally follow her life as she adjusts to new things. They start homeschooling her and you could talk about some of her funnier reactions...and her amazement at some of life's most simple things. You could show her slow healing process and her growing relationship with everyone, especially Edward. You could maybe even have her come across Renee and Charlie again later on...and I'm not sure, but maybe she'd freak out again, and when they tried hurting her, she'd realize they really can't...and then that would help her heal! And they'd learn their lesson...Anyway, that's just some of my ideas:P |
Feenrai chapter 1 . 10/2/2009 Aw...great! Btw, I have a totally perfect idea for...the name of this story... Nevermind...I just looked and you've already used that very name for your own story:P I was GOING to say that it should be "invincible"...going from "invisible" to "invincible" would have been an awesome play on words:D But since you've already used it I guess I'll have to think of something else:P Sorry! |
Shuvorn chapter 2 . 7/6/2009 I love your stories! And Inisible was cute. Can't wait til this is up _ |
Scarlett Umber chapter 2 . 5/15/2009 Hey, I know you haven't updated this one in a while, but you should totally keep working on it! I really enjoyed reading Invisable, but I think there should be more! Oh, and the story should get named something... something beginning with an "I" again. and just one word, keep it similar. |
danni20201 chapter 1 . 5/7/2009 i love your stories!i cant wait until you write more for this book. i was thinking you could call this book 'eternity' or 'getting healed' |
Sarabiiiiiiii chapter 1 . 4/24/2009 I like your story, I've added it to my C2 if thats okay :) |
Heartstones chapter 1 . 4/7/2009 Wow! This story and the one before are excellent. i almost started to cry in the other one. It's so powerful, but so innocent at the same time! Wonderful! title name idea: I am Loved (kinda crappy, but i think it fits!) |
Blood vampire princess chapter 2 . 1/29/2009 you should so add to this story that last one had me on the edge of my set most of the time plz add to this one can't wait to hear it i love ur fics. :) |
99997777733 chapter 2 . 1/16/2009 title this fic 'Visable' it could work... since the first one was invisable... i can't wait to read the next chapter _ Keep up the good work~ |
clearwatercullener chapter 2 . 12/14/2008 hey um ilove it so keep writting plz plz are u gonna keep writing plz say it fine i'll read the others but write in canot put u on my favs if youdonnot write ok bibi |
black burning heart66 chapter 1 . 11/18/2008 hello. i just read invisible, but like the idiot i am i forgot to review in my rush to read the beginning of the sequel. anyways, i loved invisible. her character, well, you captured it perfectly, the person you created, your bella seemed so real when i was reading. the storyline worked too, again, everything happened at the right times, though i wish there had been a revenge trip against charlie and renee, they deserve to die! anyways, believe it or not i am usually a non violent person, but i hate people suffering, even if they're not real. so please keep writing the sequel, i need to know what's gonna happen! and i'm also reading your twilight/max ride crossover, and i love that too. anyways, back to the point, please update soon! |
Monnn chapter 1 . 11/2/2008 i love invisible its such an amazing story and i really cant wait for the sequal untitled to be updated x amazing stories |