Finally I’m finished. Thanks a lot for your writing. I like your story and enjoy reading it as a male cloti fans.

Although, for me, I actually like more to the characterization in Tess and Cloud in Addiction story with the more confidence Cloud a bit. How he ask Tifa date and propose her just need to be more manly. It’s too plain for a “special event” imho. I prefer the seducer and pour the affections type till the woman ready to give more and strike a bulls eye rather than asking permission hehe. But still, I enjoy this story.

For the Tifa side, she better give a more rewarding act after knowing how jealous the Cloud had. It will be enjoyable seen the woman light up and proud of herself due her man become like that because of her. But i see Tifa just act plainly insensitive, it is a turned down feeling from me. My women will smile widely looking at my frowns all day and say how she like it everytime I shown some jealousy. Usually she tease me a lot but in the end she soared my ego by saying “let him be, I’m only yours only, nothing he can do”. That is a very rewarding recovery feeling there.

As for the story telling in romance side, I recommend to enhanced the affection type description such as blush, flattered, happy tears, thumping, smile widely, stutter, worrying sick.

In summary, I would say what an enjoyable story. Interesting plot with enjoy the up and down feeling. I see all the key moments can be enhanced and not in the “peak performance”, such as: 1st kiss, 1st physical contact, 1st jealous recovery, 1st sleep together, the proposal. And let the other chapter building the feeling for the key moments.

In the end, I really like to see other new cloti storiess with different plot and setting. Thanks a lot.

You know, this is the thing that I hate most about Tifa. She tolerate very much about something really grossing and didn’t really sensitive about her partner feeling.

Hard to enjoy this chap, since not enough recovery from the disgust. Even Tifa thinking more of that dick feeling than Cloud.

Gosh this story gives me butterflies. I love it.

I cannot stop smiling as I’m reading. I loveeee cloti fluff! You do it sooo well!

Love love love!

Omg this is amazing so far! The feels!

I absolutely love this story. Scratch that, I love all your stories that I have read!

Aww so sweet!

Hahaha I can imagine

This chapter is funny! Way to go tifa.

What a romantic and lovely chapter :)

Such a hot chapter. I love it!

I'm fanning myself because this chapter is so damn hot and sexy

I love possessive cloud!

Aww so cute...