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Good story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

What a cute story.

For some reason, I can only find it cute and nothing spectacular. The description of unnecessary subjects were much more informative than the important subjects, such as the fight with Velshtein.

The last chapter's small bit in the end indicated your OC's confidence of so many people liking her. It seemed a bit ignorant. And this chapter only sets it in stone with the obvious. She's only 10. For her to be the center of attention as a prodigy is understandable, but you make it out as if every male is out to get her. Not only that, but she's aware of it.

If I'm wrong, then I would love it if you explain things to me. I hope I'm wrong with some aspects, because if that's not so, then this is a warning that your character's becoming less and less likable.

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I love this story. Please update soon. He is so jealous of Cunningham. :)

Nakoda likes her aw. How sweet. I hate hotels too they're so not homie if you know what I mean.

And a wanted poster? Might as well there are enough people who want her. Haha. anyway...keep up the great work update soon.

I wish I had a privet plane! Dang. Glass walls? Oh god I'm glad I'll never go there I'm afraid of heights I'd faint at the site. My heart's beating fast just thinking of it. (anime tears)

I'd just want to get out of there if I were her. But alas I'm so...that's good.

Wow this sounds like a pretty good story can't wait to read the rest. But this story is already updated so yeah...I was pretty surprised when I found out a new story appeared for this anime and I don't regret reading it. It's GREAT!