This is a good story, you should write another one.

Usually I don't really have a thing for AU and I really like Hallibel, but this time you made it all worth it. Loved the last two lines, Keep up the good work.
I didn't know Yoruichi have that slow of an reaction time.

that was awesome! your a great writer!

You're an awesome writer.

Lol, Yoruichi and late reactions? who would have guessed?

Aw! That really surprised me! The fight scenes were really kool, and the end was both faunny and hopelessly romantic! Good Job!

Simply amazing. The characters were beautifully portrayed, and the battle scenes were terrific. I thought the level of depth you gave the characters through their actions and words was a step above the rest too. Great work!

Aww! The ending...wow, Byaky really shocked me! (Byaky is an awesome nickname, by the way)

Aww! So totally cute! I love these two

Wow, I totally didn't expect the ending...

Great fic~