This was cute! I really liked it! :)

I've read a lot of stories and this one was the most well written compared to others that may not even make sense or have correct punctuation although my punctuation is usually wrong when I write stories at home. Well good job I loved the story.

I loved the kiss! It was so cute! You should try to write some more Shugo Chara stories someday *hopeful expression*. It was sweet of Ikuto to walk Amu home since it was late and dark. I also love Ikuto playing the violin. It's my second favorite instrument. Piano is my favorite. AMUTO FOREVER! :)

very good.

I know this review is late, but I couldn't stop myself from reviewing! I love your writing style! It's amazing! And I live your ideas that you create! It's so original and I love how you capture the emotion into it! It's terrifically amazing, ni doubt about that. So yeah.

This. Was. Incredible. Absolutely breathtaking! You can not fathom how badly I wanted to be in Amu's spot (well, you probably could, actually since everybody seems to feel the same way about him as I do). Amu is a lucky girl. AMUTO FOREVER!

Anyways, back to what I was saying, you are an amazing writer. This one-shot is probably one of the best Amuto stories I have ever read. And trust me, I have read a LOT of Amuto stories. The way you use description is a masterpiece in itself as well. You're writing has the incredible ability to not only paint the picture in the readers' heads as the story progresses, but it also brings the story to life. Well, it did for me at least. I could all but see Ikuto play his violin, and hear the sweet, melancholy notes dance around my head. Not to mention the kiss that he stole in the The story was just so believable! The characters acted just like they would in the anime or manga.

I wish that my writing was as good as yours... Oh, please forgive me. I tend to ramble occasionally about the things that are important to me. This isn't even close to the usual amount that I usually do. Anyways, keep up the good work!

Oh wow, this story was lovely. It was a joy to read and made me smile throughout each sentence. You were very detailed with the whole story and the atmosphere around the characters. I think my favorite was when you were describing Ikuto playing his violin. That was very creative and chuck full of detail. It was a very nicely written story and you should be proud of yourself for thinking this up in your head. Keep up your amazing work! ;D

that was really good! :)

i liked the "It's a secret" part lol really ikuto!

-Red

I loooove it!

I loved this like, like...CHOCOLATE! And trust me, I love chocolate very much.

Love this~

wow... that was amazing. I like that it was more of a sweet kiss, since amu's 12 and ikuto's 17. though, love knows no age ;]

Adorable! I loved it. :) Might I suggest, though, that you find a few more descriptive words for eyes? I noticed you like to use 'orbs' a lot; it's not that noticeable, so you don't have to change it if you don't want to, but it's just a small suggestion. You're fanfics are pretty much perfect otherwise. :)

great one-shot :D definitely a fave man, i love all ur fanfics! x3 keep up the great work~!

so cute and peacful aw that made me sleepy, good job please write more amuto :)