I like fanfic more where Tim stops being the forgiving doormat. This story does more justice to the idea that Tim is not a strong person. A real let down.

Gibbs is such a moral coward and hypocrite...

Tony's gone and still finds a way to make everything about him...poor Tim.

A good story

Gotta say that I agree with the reviewer that wrote the relationship between Gibbs and Abby is creepy. However, the dynamic between Gibbs and Tim makes up for that sin. I really enjoyed this story.

The relationship between Gibbs and Abby is distinctly creepy, but apart from that it's a good story.

i can't wait to read the rest!

This was a masterpiece. Only one thing I didn't agree with, is that Gibbs is kind. No way no how. He has his moments - very seldom. But a kind man? Let's be real!

I don't get why you stopped writing 'Tim' stories. This was so great and in character. Everything else you've written is 'Tony'. I think you nshould mix it up more (I've often said that about the show : )

Anyway, I enjoyed this.

I will be absolutely honest. I have re-read this story more times than I can count, and I am still left crying and laughing (sometimes at the same time) with every read. I am continuously impressed with this story and how you've slowly unraveled the plot to such an amazing conclusion. Your plot - amazing. Your writing style - professional. Your understanding of the team dynamics - impeccable. All in all, a better read than many of the published books or official NCIS episodes I have read and watched.

So many scenes that I want to commend on. So little time and space. I'll just pick out my favorite and tell you that the scene when Gibbs visits Tim to apologize and the conversation that ensued between them (bringing up Shannon, the hesitant apology, the punch, the go away, the "look what you've done") was absolute perfection and had me crying like a waterfall. That was so beautiful. That was... so strong.

Lastly, I'd like to offer an apology. You see, I'm not the kind of reader who opts to leave reviews. If I like or love a story, I follow or favorite it and the author - but not really leave a review. But your story? Your story DESERVED a review. It was a great injustice to you for me to re-read this over and over again without leaving a single commendation until now.

Again, good job. Great job, really. This story has brought me to read all your other NCIS stories and I hope to read more from you in the (hopefully near) future. :)

Nice plot, just Ducky wouldn't have a kid without marriage. For some reason, I just dislike it. No idea why. I think I just need torture, bloody bodies, and NCIS in one fanfic...

This was magnificent. I couldn't stop reading it; I was SO afraid Tim wouldn't come back. You did a fine job of humanizing Gibbs without taking anything away from his reality. Wonderful!

I know I'm a little late, but I just read this story. I'd like to thank you for sucking up over nine hours of my time with this breathtaking story. I love the thought you put into it, I love the characters and their development (of course the main characters were created by someone else, but you captured them well), I love your writing style... heck, I loved IT. This is, honestly, one story that hasn't dissapointed me by ommiting a good plot or in-character people or even good writing. Coming from me this might not mean much but I feel obligated to say: GREAT JOB!

iizninja, PEACE, God Bless!

Cried my way through the last few chapters, thanks for a wonderful story. And...it was so cool to have Mike included, had a tear when Gibbs wonders whether he'll ever see him again. Thank you.

Excellent, excellent, excellet!

Wow it felt like I was actually watching an episode of NCIS! Hey maybe you can send this story to the writers of the show and get it made official. The epi would be awesomeness! Oh and I just noticed your name Trivette? :D Walker fan much? Hey I loved Trivette to, more than Norris...but don't tell Charlie that ;)