more please...

I Like, I Lust, I Love!Please Update Soon!

I am enjoying this story, I really am. Your writing is good, your flow is smooth and the overall vibe of this fic is great!

but in terms of Kennedy, it's a sign of a poor writer to show such obvious bias of a character. I can understand you needing to create tension in the house, as tension always gets the plot going, but i am sure you could have done it with out being so obvious about your dislike.

asides from that hic-cup i am greatly enjoying your fic! looking forward to more!

I love Buffy, I love Ginny, this is PERFECTION!

that was good update soon.

get faith out of jail! i'm sure buffy and faith will have a long talk about the past and both their mistakes! great job,keep it up!

Hope that it won't take you a year to update again! I would like to see where this story goes to.

Interesting chapter, kinda bumbed by that cliffhanger though... might be kinda interesting to see Ginny break Faith out with apparition or something...

oh gods plz let the weasleys be ok... great job and plz update soon

... You updated. Wait. What? You updated? You updated?! OMG, YOU UPDATED! Finally! *does happy dance all around the house then suddenly trips on the edge of the carpet and faceplants on the floor* *raises head* I've been waiting for this to happen since I can't remember when! The word ecstatic cannot even begin to describe how I'm feeling right now! :D :D :D :D Okay, okay, relax, everything's gonna be okay. *exhales breathe* Pretty good chapter, hoped it would be longer but I'll take what I can get. Love the Weasley parts and how you are using the First on that front. Wish there was a tad bit more development *mumbles with a frown*considering how long we've been waiting*mumbles with a frown*. Still, though, you updated! And that means you haven't abandoned this story yet, and haven't kicked all of our loving asses to the curb! That's it for my review for now! I hope it won't take another..*checks calendar* Last update 22/1/2013... What? It's only been, like, 3 months? I think I've lost my touch with reality... I'll be taking my leave now to, you know, go and reconnect with the outside world... Cheers! xD

-Demetra

Leaving her in prison, a sitting duck, is idiotic (not that stopped the writers) not to mention she hasn't done anything at this point that Willow or Buffy hasn't done (heck, Finch is EQUALLY Buffy's fault! No one ever brings that up on the show! Nor how had Faith mentioned Buffy during the confession, they'd be rotting side-by-side) so by all means get her out. If all the authorities have on Finch and Worth is Faith's confession (likely, otherwise she'd been a suspect, not wanted for questioning) then should Faith retract it, she walks free.
As for the assaults...well, what was a grown may doing picking up underaged girls at a bus stop and another in a alleyway with one, hmmm? And seeing as Wes was likely sending Faith to her death or at least torture with the Council in Sunnydale (even Cordy called him on that one) Faith's torture of him was getting off lightly. Done that to MY sister... plus he was up and around in a day so Faith obviously was more interested in getting Angel pissed enough to kill her and venting to Wes, not seriously harming him.
No one else it seemed press charges. So, Judge says "minimum time, time served! Next case!" Now problem's solved, Faith ain't wanted, and maybe some self-proclaimed morally superior idiots in Sunnydale learn something. Like get that after all THEIR less than legal and oft-fatal screw-ups (how many Knights of Byzantium DID Buffy kill...) Faith is the ONLY one among them that actually went to jail for killing anyone...and one was an accident Buffy caused!
Seriously, you can get some great drama from that...

The Cracker!

I love your story! I really do. I would like it if you didnt intervene too much with the Golden Trios hunt for Horcruxes and if you didnt pair Buffy with anyone. I actually love Spuffy, but I think that after dieing Buffy is too messed up to really start a relationship, and if she did, it could only be twisted and sick. I love the way you are portraying Ginny, I always thought her character had so much unexplored potential. I also happen to adore Faith, so please make her really important! I like Willow/Kennedy but I also love how Kennedy is all messed up in your story, and I would appreciate it if you made their relationship a lot more complicated than it was in canon. I really like the way you write, you seem to be able to describe everyone perfectly.
Please update soon! Never give up on this story, or I will be very disappointed.

hmmm wow at least the Weasleys know she's kinda ok? Mortal Peril but still kinda ok for the most part... . great job and plz update soon

can't give an opinion on ginny, not a harry potter reader or watcher! buffy and faith all the way! :) and ugh xander and dawn ? yuck!

i have to say i really like this story! considering i've never seen a harry potter movie, or wanted to, that says something for your writting.