You wrote these scenes well and did them justice. I would like to see you continue but as you said you doubt don't know or think you'll be doing this genre of story again. Mob stories aren't that well done here, even though this more or less focuses on the exchange between these two characters, it was well done. You even added some of your own spin to the stuff which is also well done. I'd like to see you do another story about Toni C, maybe when he meets Claude and the whole situation with him or maybe something after Salvatore dying and him becoming boss or underboss for a time until the whole family ends up either wiped out or moving on since we know in GTA IV there is the five families and the Leones aren't apart of it.
But if not that's fine this is truly a piece of art and I enjoyed it through and through. Very nice job.

Omg! This story so good! Praise to the writer!

Fuck dude, that was great. I mean, I really felt for Toni, even as I played the game those years ago.
Well, it would make one hell of a movie, them both leaving the Life and starting anew. Finding true happiness and all.
But GTA is GTA, no happy endings.

I wish Rockstar would reconsider the possibility of Toni x Toshiko, like, he would grab her leg at the right time, then live a happy life together. Eh, but this is GTA. The Protagonist shall never have a "happy" life... *sigh*

This is my first GTA fanfic, and I've never finished Liberty City, but this story made me understand the characters even though I don't know them well.

I felt sad after reading this but I wasn't disappointed. Amazing job c:

ps: I bet i'm years late in reviewing this.

Awesome...

Again, I'm unfamiliar with the characters except in your story, and you made them seem very real and fleshed-out. You've done what is rarely accomplished in fanfic: taken the subject places the original medium can't. Thank you for bringing this to us.

This is an amazing story. Very deep and emotional. You showed a side of Toni that no one has seen before. Please do not stop writing for GTA, with all the bad writers out there it would be a shame to have the good ones stop.

That was utterly depressing...but very well written. I've never actually read a GTA fic before. Good job!

I think I'm gonna go cry now...