Reviews for Veracity
meijosui chapter 1 . 7/3/2017
This is an intense chapter with Marik being overprotective. Aww, poor Mheralo... social life is tough with Marik as a father. Hope he does consider a little bit of her feelings. Sorry this is an overdue review but I want to charge through my reading (YAY!).Yagasawi is going to be having a tough time confronting her Marik... Poor Mheralo. *Hugs Mheralo* Great Oneshot though, even when you decided to make it a longer story.
Mariklover222 chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
awesome
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 9 . 1/13/2011
aww i like seeing Marik in a protective fatherly role :3

can't wait to read more

update soon :D
Kermita chapter 8 . 5/24/2009
Sticking with Marik gives us more suspense so it's all good! :D

Great chapter as usual. A flashback being used to pinpoint what was wrong with Mhera was nice as well. Great job!
searing light dragon chapter 8 . 5/1/2009
Good chapter.
Rugrat247 chapter 8 . 4/30/2009
That worked out well! Aww...scary. I want to see what happens!

Update soon! _

Looking forward to the Jewelshipping oneshot!
sherabo chapter 2 . 4/30/2009
very touching between Marik/Mhera. Most write him without so much feeling and I enjoy you give him more out of life than sex.
sherabo chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
BOld and colorful, a storm is in the making, I feel the breeze.
PsychopathicPrincess chapter 8 . 4/29/2009
well that is sad...at least Marik knows when Mhera is in danger

can't wait to read more

update soon :D
Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 8 . 4/29/2009
Ooh, this chapter is so sad! Poor Marik...

I love the description of the last few paragraphs, with Marik rushing through the passageway...
Rugrat247 chapter 7 . 1/20/2009
I think I know whose eyes those are.

Noinreil, that little...I shall not say the curse. XD

Great chapter! Update soon
Rugrat247 chapter 6 . 1/20/2009
Aww...I can feel tears forming in my eyes. Darn you! 0_0 Haha...

Poor Marik D: Someone give him a hug! XD
Rugrat247 chapter 5 . 1/20/2009
Aww...Marik's really a big softy...in his own way _~
Rugrat247 chapter 4 . 1/20/2009
I'm glad he apologized.

Great chapter
Rugrat247 chapter 3 . 1/20/2009
Aww...she accidentally said it was Sheon. Poor Mheralo! -sobs-
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