Have you read "Rain" by SayuraK?

The first charter is very similar to this, some of the exact same phrasing as well.

Your story is very well written, with a great ending.

Please keep writing.

~Nenet

Oh...the ending was deep.

Yeah, L would do that, wouldn't he?

Very nicely written, I love how you put that Raito didn't stop what was going on, though he didn't really know WHAT was going on, either.

I'll bet he felt like crap later on, though. xD

the dead of L is very sad! good story